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When you learn a foreign language , all of your skills are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When you learn a foreign language, all of your skills are equally important. yp23
Learning other language is always challenging, It reflects not only on speaking or listening, but also writing & reading is also equivalently crucial. I strongly agree that leaning a language or any thing should adopt top to bottom, while others opine that adopting foreign language partially is better. this essay will explain why there is different view and will end up with benefits of developing language skills. To begin with developing foreign language skills has more advantages. Firstly, it will help boost career. For example, when a person good at all Non-native module such as listening, reading, writing & speaking can expect a better professional life in foreign land as a teacher or others. Moreover, enhancing other language leads to develop confidence level as well. Secondly, knowing other language help to get a job as a translator in a multinational company, From my personal experience when i worked for a Chinese company salary for the Translator tend to very high than other employees, this is just because not everyone has greater language skill. lastly but not least, learning foreign language more likely help a person to know about other countries culture, tradition. Furthermore, learning other language also helpful to make friends from rest of the through internet. Meanwhile, there are some people who disagree to cope up non-native language each module. Moreover, todays era more likely depend on communication based rather than paper based, instead of reading strong speaking and listening ability make things more easier. However, in education sector reading ability as important as other module. Conversely, when a person in abroad they need to more focus on speaking and listening rather than others to get more socialized with people. To conclusion, learning other language can not develop overnight its need more practice, when a person is good at speaking, reading, writing, listening is better for life, while knowing partially don't have negative effect because its better to have something than nothing.
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professional life in
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land as a teacher or others.
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, enhancing
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language
leads to develop confidence level
as well
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language
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in abroad they need to more focus on speaking and listening
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more socialized with
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IELTS essay When you learn a foreign language, all of your skills are equally important.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
323 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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