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When you learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, and writing) are equally important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When you learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, and writing) are equally important. kwkK
Globalization has brought in all countries across the world on the same need which ought to learn various types of language. One of the vital principle when learning a foreign language is to balance importance of passive, reading and listening and active, writing and speaking skills. I completely agree with the above statement and provide my supporting examples in this essay. First of all, primary cause for learning language is based on the migration reasons which can be related with academic or economic ones. In all circumstances, it is important for individuals ta have an in-depth understanding of the language that destination country is following. In real world cases, it would be beyond the bound of possibilty to cross the language barries withouth knowladge of this 4 language abilities. A real world example can be observed from people who stuggle with the studies which is caused by poor understanding of lecturer, reading materials, and lacking to express person's capacity throgh the exam papers. Secondly,
Globalization has brought in all countries across the world on the same need which ought to learn various types of
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language
. One of the vital principle when learning a foreign
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is to balance importance of passive, reading and listening and active, writing and speaking
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. I completely
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with the above statement and provide my supporting examples in this essay.

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First of all
, primary cause for learning
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language
is based
on the migration reasons which can
be related
with academic or economic ones. In all circumstances, it is
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important
for individuals ta have an in-depth understanding of the
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language
that destination country is following. In real world cases, it would be beyond the bound of
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possibilty
to cross the
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language
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barries
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of this 4
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abilities. A real world example can
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people
who
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stuggle
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IELTS essay When you learn a foreign language, all four skills (listening, reading, speaking, and writing) are equally important.

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