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Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. mG0d
Nowadays, people are coming to believe that hosting an international sports event is good for their nation, while others have views that speak otherwise. I am of the opinion that hosting an international sports event, is very progressive for a country, and that they should in fact be pro-active in promoting such events. An affair of such scale as an international sports event can really bring in a lot of international media attention to the host country. Not only will it encourage the local sport's unions and committees, but it will also bring in a fair deal of recognition amongst the international sports community. It can also create awareness about sports as a viable career option. Undoubtedly, it will help many second and third-world countries gain confidence. However, hosting a crowd from multiple nationalities demands good infrastructure and amenities to be sufficiently available. It could just be a matter of planning for some countries, whereas for others it could mean a hefty investment. While wanting to make their international presence more prominent, several second and third-world countries could lose their motivation to other priorities. Another opinion that could be gathered from people is to rather hold an international science expo than a sports event, as science is a more stable field. Nonetheless, moving towards progression with that mindset would not be ideal. In conclusion, hosting an international sports event could prove to be extremely useful for a country, bringing it prosperity and recognition. As such, there is nothing detrimental in the process. Despite some financial setbacks and regressive mindsets, I believe that by all means, a nation should give it all to hosting an international sports event.
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for their nation, while others have views that speak
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. I am of the opinion that
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, is
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progressive for a
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country
, and that they should in fact be pro-active in promoting such
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events
.

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international
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sports
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can
really
bring in
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a lot of
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international
media attention to the host
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country
. Not
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will it encourage the local sport's unions and committees,
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also
bring in a
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fair
deal of recognition amongst the
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international
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community. It can
also
create awareness about
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sports
as a viable career option.
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, it will
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and third-world
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gain confidence.

However
,
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a crowd from multiple nationalities demands
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good
infrastructure and amenities to be
sufficiently
available. It could
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just
be a matter of planning for
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some
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countries
, whereas for others it could mean a hefty investment. While wanting to
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make
their
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international
presence more prominent, several second and third-world
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countries
could lose their motivation to other priorities. Another opinion that could
be gathered
from
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people
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is
to
rather
hold an
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international
science expo than a
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sports
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event
, as science is a more stable field. Nonetheless, moving towards progression with that mindset would not be ideal.

In conclusion
,
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hosting
an
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international
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sports
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event
could prove to be
extremely
useful for a
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country
, bringing it prosperity and recognition. As such, there is nothing detrimental in the process. Despite
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some
financial setbacks and regressive mindsets, I believe that by all means, a nation should give it all to
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hosting
an
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international
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
sports
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
event
.
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IELTS essay Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad.

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