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When students are in large classes it is very hard for the teachers to give every student individual attention. What can educational authorities do about this? v.2

When students are in large classes it is very hard for the teachers to give every student individual attention. What can educational authorities do about this? v. 2
Nowadays, in some educational institutions, each pupil cannot be given enough opportunity to learn study materials mostly because teachers cannot pay attention to every single student in a large classroom. This may negatively influence their study performance, and I believe that several empiric solutions, including establishing more schools, enrolling more teachers, encouraging students to participate in team works, online courses or using of novel electronic methods, can phenomenally be useful. To begin with, in these classes, students must be motivated to be involved in group practising. Clearly, instructors teaching in a vast area cannot focus on each applicant; however, dividing all students into five to ten pupils in each group can assist them to become more active in their study, raising the quality of teaching generally. As a prime example, in Math classes, some students may loose huge information because their seats are in the last rows in the class and cannot understand the meaning of questions or answers as much as those sitting closer to the teacher. Had they been separated into several groups, each member would have had different abilities to come up with solutions for difficult types of mathematic lessons. Again, if the population in a country is high, the need for more educational institutions is a must. Therefore the authorities should build more school and classrooms and enrol more teachers to address this issue. Another positive impact is the use of online courses. Admittedly, in some curriculums, educators can teach lessons through the web, and it is not mandatory scholars participate in live lectures. For instance, literature is a kind of study material which trainees can study the related subjects through the Internet because they can easily access vocabulary, grammar or given samples on the screen of a computer. As a result, education authorities will have more fortunes to divide more important lessons into smaller classes. The school authority should encourage both teachers and students to take advantages or modern technologies like projectors, sound systems, the internet and this will help to address the issue. For instance, if a teacher updates his blog with his lectures, students who had difficulty understanding it could easily study it from home. Some new digital methods can be used.   Not surprisingly, developing of technology, students can have a better intake of study materials. In particular, in MIT University, a well-known North American university, students have their own video screens in their seat, enabling them to see and hear their teacher’s quotes from near. The tutor can find each pupil on a huge screen installed on the wall. Furthermore, the concept of teaching assistance from a classroom should be adopted by the authority. Each class can have 2-3 teaching assistant who would be nominated and rewarded by the school authority so that they regularly discuss all the students and forward their queries to the teachers. This would reduce the problem to a great extent. In conclusion, now some students have to study their courses in highly populated classes, reducing their study performance. From my perspective, authorities can address this problem by implementing several practical solutions, including group studying, offering some lessons from a distance or using the latest modern visual system for a better teaching while the government can address this problem by establishing more schools and by enrolling more qualified teachers.
Nowadays, in
some
educational institutions, each pupil cannot be
given
enough
opportunity to learn
study
materials
mostly
because
teachers
cannot pay attention to every single
student
in a large classroom. This may
negatively
influence their
study
performance, and I believe that several empiric solutions, including establishing more
schools
, enrolling more
teachers
, encouraging
students
to participate in team works, online courses or using of novel electronic methods, can
phenomenally
be useful.

To
begin
with, in these
classes
,
students
must
be motivated
to
be involved
in
group
practising
.
Clearly
, instructors
teaching
in a vast area cannot focus on each applicant;
however
, dividing all
students
into five to ten pupils in each
group
can assist them to become more active in their
study
, raising the quality of
teaching
generally
. As a prime example, in Math
classes
,
some
students
may
loose
huge information
because
their seats are in the last rows in the
class
and cannot understand the meaning of questions or answers as much as those sitting closer to the
teacher
. Had they
been separated
into several
groups
, each member would have had
different
abilities to
come
up with solutions for difficult types of mathematic lessons.

Again, if the population in a country is high, the need for more educational institutions is a
must
.
Therefore
the
authorities
should build more
school
and classrooms and enrol more
teachers
to
address
this issue.

Another
positive
impact is the
use
of online courses.
Admittedly
, in
some
curriculums, educators can teach lessons through the web, and it is not mandatory scholars participate in
live
lectures.
For instance
, literature is a kind of
study
material which trainees can
study
the related subjects through the Internet
because
they can
easily
access vocabulary, grammar or
given
samples on the screen of a computer.
As a result
, education
authorities
will have more fortunes to divide more
important
lessons into smaller
classes
. The
school
authority
should encourage both
teachers
and
students
to take advantages or modern technologies like projectors, sound systems, the internet and this will
help
to
address
the issue.
For instance
, if a
teacher
updates his blog with his lectures,
students
who had difficulty understanding it could
easily
study
it from home.
Some
new digital methods can be
used
.
 
Not
surprisingly
, developing of technology,
students
can have a better intake of
study
materials.
In particular
, in MIT University, a well-known North American university,
students
have their
own
video screens in their seat, enabling them to
see
and hear their
teacher’s
quotes from near. The tutor can find each pupil on a huge screen installed on the wall.

Furthermore
, the concept of
teaching
assistance from a classroom should
be adopted
by the
authority
. Each
class
can have 2-3
teaching
assistant who would
be nominated
and rewarded by the
school
authority
so
that they
regularly
discuss all the
students
and forward their queries to the
teachers
. This would
reduce
the problem to a great extent.

In conclusion
,
now
some
students
have to
study
their courses in
highly
populated
classes
, reducing their
study
performance. From my perspective,
authorities
can
address
this problem by implementing several practical solutions, including
group
studying, offering
some
lessons from a distance or using the latest modern visual system for a better
teaching
while the
government
can
address
this problem by establishing more
schools
and by enrolling more qualified
teachers
.
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
57Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay When students are in large classes it is very hard for the teachers to give every student individual attention. What can educational authorities do about this? v. 2

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
552 words
6.0
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