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What's your hometown famous for?

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there are many fascinating things to see and do in the area. There are historical buildings here, as well as clear blue rivers that run freely for days and fields of dragon fruit that shine at night. That western gateway country will provide you with unforgettable adventures. My hometown is well-known for the natural cave system called Phong Nha caves. It’s recognized as the world herritage by UNESCO. You may not believe but there are millions of tourists visit my hometown every year.
there
are
many
fascinating things to
see
and do in the area. There are historical buildings here,
as well
as
clear
blue rivers that run
freely
for days and fields of dragon fruit that shine at night. That western gateway country will provide you with unforgettable adventures. My hometown is well-known for the natural cave system called
Phong
Nha
caves. It’s recognized as the world
herritage
by UNESCO. You may not believe
but
there are millions of tourists visit my hometown every year.
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IELTS essay What's your hometown famous for?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
83 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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