Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

What’s the favorite book you have read and what did you learn from it?

What’s the favorite book you have read and what did you learn from it? GMLx2
There were a number of books that I have read throughout my life; some came out exceptionally great whereas some were too simple. Among them, I would choose Rich Dad Poor Dad by Robert Kiyosaki and Sharon Letcher as my favourite one. This book highlights on financial literacy, how to become financially independent, and tips to grow wealth. To begin with, it is a story of a boy named Robert Kiyosaki who has two father; one his biological father and another his best friend’s father. His real father was poor, whereas his other father was extremely rich. The first part of the story showcases the difficult life of poor people; where Robert’s poor father works hard to sustain their life. On the other hand, his other father was developing wealth by investing in various sectors. So, it was his best friend’s dad who advised and educated him on how business and money flows? The statement that triggers him the most was “ Mind Your Own Business” which meant stop living and earning for others. So, following the footsteps of his rich father, he was able to become financially independent, an intelligent investor, and an expert in this field. This is a type of book which is perfect for those who want to be successful and live a financially independent life. It will enlighten you with vast information on building wealth as well as show business, and money flow. Moreover, it was very fruitful for me as I learned so much knowledge which you can't get on blogs and articles. While reading, this book was very captivating as on every page of it you get to know more knowledge of the financial world. You cannot be successful unless you take some risks. To move ahead in life smoothly, you must start to care yourself first then others so no one would hold you back from achieving your aim. Such an informative and realistic book needs to be shared among people so people can gain some morals from it. Also, implement in their life. Therefore, I keep mentioning this book Poor Dad Rich Dad as my favourite wherever I am asked?
There were a number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
that I have read throughout my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
;
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
came out
exceptionally
great whereas
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
were too simple. Among them, I would choose
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Rich
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Dad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Dad
by Robert
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kiyosaki
and Sharon
Possible spelling mistake found.
Letcher
as my
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
one. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
highlights on financial literacy, how to become
financially
independent, and tips to grow wealth.

To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, it is a story of a boy named Robert
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kiyosaki
who has two
Possible agreement error. The noun 'father' seems to be countable, so consider using: "fathers".
father
; one his biological
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
father
and
A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "his best" or "another best"?
another his best
friend’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
father
. His real
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
father
was
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
, whereas his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
father
was
extremely
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rich
. The
first
part of the story showcases the difficult
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
; where Robert’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
father
works
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to sustain their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand, his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
father
was developing wealth by investing in various sectors.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, it was his best friend’s
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
dad
who advised and educated him on how business and money flows? The statement that triggers him the most was
Don't put a space on both sides of a quote symbol
“
Mind Your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Own
Business” which meant
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
living and earning for others.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
, following the footsteps of his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rich
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
father
, he was able to become
financially
independent, an intelligent investor, and an expert in this field.

This is a type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
which is perfect for those who want to be successful and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
a
financially
independent
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
. It will enlighten you with vast information on building wealth
as well
as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
business, and money flow.

Moreover
, it was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
fruitful for me as I learned
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
much knowledge which you can't
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
on blogs and articles. While reading, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
was
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
captivating as on every page of it you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
to know more knowledge of the financial world. You cannot be successful unless you take
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risks
. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
ahead in
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
smoothly
, you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to care yourself
first
then others
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
no one would hold you back from achieving your aim. Such an informative and realistic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
needs to
be shared
among
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can gain
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
morals from it.
Also
, implement in their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
.
Therefore
, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
mentioning this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Poor
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Dad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Rich
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Dad
as my
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
wherever I
am asked
?
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay What’s the favorite book you have read and what did you learn from it?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
359 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • What’s the favorite book you have read and what did you learn from it?