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What you do for fun and pleasure

What you do for fun and pleasure Jwnpk
List of activities that I do for fun and relaxation in my spare time includes singing, dancing and making memes. Why I have chosen these activities? The reason is when I am stressed or sad singing helps me to release the stress and makes me think about positive things. Although I am not so talanted at singing, I find it enjoyable. In addition, my roomates at boarding school also do love singing so we organize karaoke parties frequently. When it comes to dancing I cannot stand when I listen to something with upbeat tempo because my body starts to move automatically. I think, I am a bit talanted at this field, as my friends always praise my performance and I am blissfully happy that I contribute to brighten their moods. The same as singing, it helps me to relax, forget about problems and lift my mood. In addition, I have a favourite style of dancing, Flashmob which is really energetic and enthusiastic. I got interested in memes a year ago, when I was taking an online course about how to use Adobe Photoshop. I found it (making memes) amazing and easy. I suppose, my sense of humor also led me to choose this activity as one of my hobbies. Funny situations occur frequently here, at school. That is why, study and school are the main topics of the memes I make.
List of activities that I do for fun and relaxation in my spare time includes
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, dancing and making memes. Why I have chosen these activities?

The reason is when I am
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stressed
or sad
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singing
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helps
me to release the
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stress
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makes
me
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think
about
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positive
things. Although I am not
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talanted
at
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singing
, I find it enjoyable.
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, my
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roomates
at boarding school
also
do
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love
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singing
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so
we organize karaoke parties
frequently
.

When it
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to dancing I cannot stand when I listen to something with upbeat tempo
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because
my body
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starts
to
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move
automatically
. I
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think
, I am a bit
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talanted
at this field, as my friends always praise my
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performance and
I am
blissfully
happy that I contribute to brighten their moods. The same as
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singing
, it
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helps
me to relax, forget about problems and lift my mood.
In addition
, I have a
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favourite
style of dancing,
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Flashmob
which is
really
energetic and enthusiastic.

I
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got
interested in memes a year ago, when I was taking an online course about how to
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use
Adobe Photoshop. I found it (making memes) amazing and easy.
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I
suppose, my sense of humor
also
led me to choose this activity as one of my hobbies.
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Funny
situations occur
frequently
here, at school.
That is
why, study and school are the main topics of the memes I
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IELTS essay What you do for fun and pleasure

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
231 words
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