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What would I buy if I had 500RS?

What would I buy if I had 500RS? GMg8g

Normally people would spend 500RS on expensive clothing, electronics and other things but in this essay, I will be talking about what I would buy if I had 500RS? I would buy a bike because instead of running I could ride a bike Wich will give me fitness also it's more fun and it's less tiring. It can improve my heart and my lungs. I will buy a chair because my chair is uncomfortable, it will make me able to sit for a long time and it will help me to concentrate. The benefits for me of buying a chair are necessary for my neck to rest and other parts of my body to relax. In conclusion, I don't think it's obligatory to spend 500RS on expensive clothes because It's not necessary I prefer to buy stuff that can benefit my life like a bike, chair and other things that can help me in my life.

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 are necessary for my neck to rest and other parts of my body to relax.

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buy
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chair
 and other things that can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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