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Describe a person who is very extrovert

Describe a person who is very extrovert 56DPN
It has been proved by the researchers that extroverts are more happier than introverts. There are several job opportunities it is available only extroverts. For instance, politics, business management and teaching. However, today I would like to talk about my friend ajay who is very extrovert. We completed senior secondary education together. If I talk about his personality I must say he is outgoing and gets on well with people. His thoughts are rational and pragmatic as welll. He is an extrovert person and a number of reasons behind this.
It has
been proved
by the researchers that extroverts are
Use only "happier" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
more happier
than introverts. There are several job opportunities it is available
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only
extroverts.
For instance
, politics, business management and teaching.
However
,
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today
I would like to talk about my friend
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ajay
who is
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very
extrovert. We completed senior secondary education together.

If I talk about his personality I
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must
say he is outgoing and
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gets
on well with
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people
. His thoughts are rational and pragmatic as
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welll
. He is an extrovert person and a number of reasons behind this.
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IELTS essay Describe a person who is very extrovert

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
90 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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