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Bilingual education is important and should be supported by educators, parents and the public.

Bilingual education is important and should be supported by educators, parents and the public. MMQko
Some individuals believe that multilingual programs in schools should be promoted by all group of people. I completely agree with this idea due to the fact that broad range of opportunities will be prepared for those pupils who will be mastered two or more languages. Indeed, they will able to apply abroad for those universities or institutions which are equipped by superior facilities and tutors assisting students to have appointed in multinational companies with high salaries. All in all, students will have brighter work prospect if they are educated bilingually.
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will able
to apply abroad for those universities or institutions which
are equipped
by superior facilities and tutors assisting students to have appointed in multinational
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companies
with high salaries. All in all, students will have brighter work prospect if they
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IELTS essay Bilingual education is important and should be supported by educators, parents and the public.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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