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What would happen to Earth if humans disappeared?

What would happen to Earth if humans disappeared? YLw0j

People and the environment are the babies of the Earth. Our world could not be as we could not continue our lives. However, an idea about that how would change world without us is difficult for humans to think about it. In the first place, all of the nature activists say that our environment is tortured by factories and cars because of which air pollution or sea pollution. If one day humanity would disappear, I think that our world would pass away. Day by day people suppose that humans torments animals, but this documentary can show how animals would die without us. Secondly, all of the factories, skyscrapers and other stuff would destroy themselves and animals too. Personally, it's difficult for me to think that our world would disappear after some years without people. Our world needs us and could not be alive. To sum up, environment, people and animals as organs of the Earth, how we couldn't live without our hard, world could not without human.

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