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what world fair do you like

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the great wall of china was listed as a world heritage by UNESCO which was motsly built during the Ming Dynasty for defence purposes. this is a fantastic big stone wall. It started in 1368 and took 200 years to complete Which stretches for about 6000km from east to west, So nowadays, they called the great wall of china is a symbol of the chinese nation. A visit to the great wall will certainly bring tourists great excitement in each step of the wall. And in the future, if i have a opportunity, i will go to china and visit the great wall.
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IELTS essay what world fair do you like

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