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what will you do after graduation?

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I have a passion for teaching English. that's why I decided to apply for English teaching education major. after graduation, I will be looking for a job to pay my bill and also follow what I have been dreamt of -becoming an English teacher. these days, finding a job in this field in public school is hard and competitive. therefore, I will register in the rural area because I'm more likely to get a job there. I think I will be nice to work there because I not only can work in the job I was qualified but also help students in remote area with English.

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