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These day, the number of houses were become a recently vital issues in huge cities, which was a social consequences. It was said that only governments have enough abilities to handle this trouble.

These day, the number of houses were become a recently vital issues in huge cities, which was a social consequences. It was said that only governments have enough abilities to handle this trouble. GJRaQ
These day, the number of houses were become a recently vital issues in huge cities, which was a social consequences. It was said that only governments have enough abilities to handle this trouble. On the one hand, governments play a significant role in decreasing amount of houses in the cities. They must make some laws about how many citizens have been residing in there because most people who live in tiny villages was moving to larger cities to seek decent jobs. As a result, they can afford daily primary demands. However, the nations should concentrate on development smaller cities by building some infrastructures such as roads, bridges, and create new works to attract residents stay at their hometowns. On the other hand, the responsibility relies on not only the government but also the majority of inhabitants, therefore, they should joint the country to find out the best solutions. Some investors should invest in huge buildings since they contain a lot of apartments instead of owning their own houses, therefore, the housing trouble would be partly solved. Moreover, citizens should distribute to possibly developed cities or surrounding lands as when less the number of people the city will have more free space as well as houses. In conclusion, the housing issue was happening in large cities until to nowadays. The problem would be disappeared if the governments and residents make an effort together.
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houses
were become
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cities
, which was a social
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governments
have
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enough
abilities to handle this trouble.

On the one hand,
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governments
play a significant role in decreasing amount of
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houses
in the
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cities
. They
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must
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make
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some
laws about how
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many
citizens have been residing in there
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because
most
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people
who
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live
in tiny villages was moving to larger
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cities
to seek decent jobs.
As a result
, they can afford daily primary demands.
However
, the nations should concentrate on development smaller
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cities
by building
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some
infrastructures such as roads, bridges, and create new works to attract residents stay at their hometowns.

On the other hand
, the responsibility relies on not
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only
the
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government
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but
also
the majority of inhabitants,
therefore
, they should joint the country to find out the best solutions.
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Some
investors should invest in huge buildings since they contain
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a lot of
apartments
instead
of owning their
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own
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houses
,
therefore
, the housing trouble would be partly solved.
Moreover
, citizens should distribute to
possibly
developed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
or surrounding lands as when less the number of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
the city will have more free space
as well
as
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
.

In conclusion
, the housing issue was happening in large
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
cities
until to nowadays. The problem would
be disappeared
if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
governments
and residents
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
an effort together.
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IELTS essay These day, the number of houses were become a recently vital issues in huge cities, which was a social consequences. It was said that only governments have enough abilities to handle this trouble.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
232 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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