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What do you want to be after graduation?

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I used to want to become a doctor in the future when I was a high school student and I had studied so hard to reach that dream. But eventually I chose English Language Teacher Education as my major due to some problems. However, after three years studying at UFLs, I realised that I had made the right choice. After graduation, I’d like to become an English teacher and have an opportunity to teach students at Hoa Vang high school where I used to study. Moreover, pursuing higher education is my intention after leaving the university. This is because I want to improve my English proficiency as much as possible and become a master at English.

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