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What factors have motivated you to learn English? What factors have reduced your motivation in learning English?

What factors have motivated you to learn English? What factors have reduced your motivation in learning English? PE9eg
I started out with English as a compulsory subject when I was 9. As with many other subjects, I just learned by heart the vocabulary and what my teachers said but It was not until 7th grade that I truly got a grasp of what English was. It was all thanks to an English song, so I guess my motivation in learning English belongs to the integrative motivation group. I feel attracted by the culture of English-speaking countries through its movies, music, festivals, etc. I want to know more about what I like, so I learn English in a very relaxing manner. And I believe that's what has helped me improve my language skills gradually since pressure and stress don't seem to work well on me. In terms of demotivation, the vast ocean of vocabulary might be the biggest hurdle that I am afraid of and still not able to overcome while learning English.
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many
other subjects, I
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learned by heart the vocabulary and what my teachers said
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It was not until 7th grade that I
truly
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got
a grasp of what English was. It was all thanks to an English song,
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so
I guess my motivation in learning English belongs to the integrative motivation group. I feel attracted by the culture of English-speaking countries through its movies, music, festivals, etc. I want to know more about what I like,
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so
I learn English in a
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very
relaxing manner. And I believe that's what has
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helped
me
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improve
my language
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skills
gradually
since pressure and
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stress
don't seem to work well on me.

In terms of
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demotivation
, the vast ocean of vocabulary might be the biggest hurdle that I am afraid of and
still
not able to overcome while learning English.
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IELTS essay What factors have motivated you to learn English? What factors have reduced your motivation in learning English?

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