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• What types of leisure activities may become more popular in the future?

• What types of leisure activities may become more popular in the future? wMNMr
the higher is the pulse of life, the more demands for entertainment. nowaday, leisure activities is too used to everyone and in the future they will become more common. i think everybody has different ways to enjoyment. In the future, society will take step in the period of modernization, so leisure activities which use smart devices such as play games on computer or smartphone, watch film on web or tv, play sport with robots, . . . . may become more popular
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IELTS essay • What types of leisure activities may become more popular in the future?

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