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In a word of William Shakespeare “people usually are the happiest at home” My hometown is extremely huge it is situated in Northern part of India it is Carnal in Haryana. It is extremely beautiful place. My village is an epitome of love peace compassion and affection. It rejuvenates my mind body and soul. In my village I fell the pristine Environment and the people of my village are highly hospitable and friendly. They always behave in a diligent manner actually as I know they are too much innocent. The life of a villager is much easier than compared to the city life. My hometown is also known as for its agriculture. Manor LA Hatter is currently Chief minister of Haryana Carnal is well-known for its rich culture and Tradition. Noor Mahan is considered as the rich tradition royal essence and modal amenities. Koran lake is the most attractive place among tourism Carnal was ranked 24th among 4000+ metropolis in the list of the cleanest city of India Carnal railway station was constructed in1892 AD by the Britishers. Cantonment church tower was constructed in 1806 AD by the Britisher. Kampala Crawls first Indio American women astronaut she is also from Carnal district of Haryana. Naveen Saint Indian cricketer he is also from Carnal. Amish Banal Olympic medalist in pistol shooter he is from carnal. I belong to Carnal and I really proud to be an Indian. Carnal was selected as one of the hundred Indian metropolis to be developed as a smart city.
In a word of William Shakespeare “
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people
usually
are the happiest at home” My hometown is
extremely
huge it
is situated
in Northern part of India it is
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Carnal
in Haryana. It is
extremely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
place. My village is an epitome of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
peace compassion and affection.

It rejuvenates my mind body and soul. In my village I fell the pristine Environment and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of my village are
highly
hospitable and friendly. They always behave
Consider replacing "in a diligent manner" with the adverb for "diligent"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a diligent manner
actually as I know they are too much innocent.

The life of a villager is much easier than compared to the city life. My hometown is
also
known as for its agriculture.

Manor LA Hatter is
currently
Chief minister of Haryana

Carnal is well-known for its rich culture and Tradition.

Noor Mahan
is considered
as the rich tradition royal essence and modal amenities.

Koran lake is the most attractive place among tourism

Carnal
was ranked
24th among 4000+ metropolis in the list of the cleanest city of India

Carnal railway station
was constructed
in1892 AD by the Britishers.

Cantonment church tower
was constructed
in 1806 AD by the Britisher.

Kampala Crawls
first
Indio American women astronaut she is
also
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Carnal
district of Haryana. Naveen Saint Indian cricketer he is
also
from Carnal.

Amish Banal Olympic medalist in pistol shooter he is from carnal.

I belong to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Carnal
and I
really
proud to be an Indian.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Carnal
was selected
as one of the hundred Indian metropolis to
be developed
as a smart city.
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IELTS essay discuss about your hometown?

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