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What three things are most important in your life?

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The three most important things in my life are health, family, and time. To start with, we all agree that being healthy is the most vital part of our existence. If I have good health, I can do everything. Without health, I cannot live life to its fullest. It is important to take care of my mind, body, and soul. I always do exercise daily and eat healthy to keep fit and decrease stress. The second important thing is family. I will never meet anyone who can give me big love like my parents. No matter what I am faced up, my family is always beside me, supports and gives me useful advice to solve the problems. Finally, the last thing is time. In fact, time is more precious than money or diamond. Even if I have a lot of money, I can’t buy the time. With good time-management skills, I can build my confidence and self-esteem. If I can use my time wisely, I will not feel stressed when the exam dates are approaching. Overall, health, family, and time are indispensable things in my life.
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IELTS essay What three things are most important in your life?

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