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It is widely suggested that positive articles should be included in every social media platform. In my opinion, I partly agree with the given statement and my justifications are as follows.

It is widely suggested that positive articles should be included in every social media platform. In my opinion, I partly agree with the given statement and my justifications are as follows. g8qVl
It is widely suggested that positive articles should be included in every social media platform. In my opinion, I partly agree with the given statement and my justifications are as follows. To commence with, including equally stories which contain both adverse and positive news should be importantly considered. Having said that, if the media is penchant for more stories reporting good announcement, social users will not be able to seek out the drawback situations. In other words, the positive news already eclipsed the bad one. As a result, it can solidify the more detrimental effects of people unlikely to access the quickest urgent information, in the meantime there are a large majorities of people over the world using social media. This way leads to the fact that if the media constantly ignores the problems related to such emergencies like extreme weather events, global warming or climate change, then the chances will surely increase of an ecological crisis which is dramatically. In addition, good news also plays a pivotal role in controlling media users with such cheerful vibes. However, it is rare to read a positive information which makes front page headlines. For example, some of the good news about the vaccine intervention is much-needed to be viral and highlighted in order to encourage citizens to get vaccinated. Positive results from that field as well create a comfortable feeling for those who are still doubting whether they should get vaccinated. Ultimately, it is admittedly that it should form part of editorial policy to carry stories such as these owing to the fact that of the true fact — it brings a great impact on public morale. In conclusion, while I agree that critical positive messages should be given more publicity, it is also necessary for the media to continue reporting all the significant bad story in today-world.
It is
widely
suggested that
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positive
articles should
be included
in every social
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media
platform. In my opinion, I partly
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agree
with the
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given
statement and my justifications are as follows.

To commence with, including
equally
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stories
which contain both adverse and
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positive
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news
should be
importantly
considered. Having said that, if the
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media
is penchant for more
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stories
reporting
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good
announcement, social users will not be able to seek out the drawback situations.
In other words
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
positive
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news
already eclipsed the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bad
one.
As a result
, it can solidify the more detrimental effects of
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people
unlikely to access the quickest urgent information, in the meantime there are a large
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majorities
of
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people
over the world using social
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media
. This way leads to the fact that if the
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media
constantly
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ignores
the problems related to such emergencies like extreme weather
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events
, global warming or climate
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change
, then the chances will
surely
increase of an ecological crisis which is
dramatically
.

In addition
,
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good
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news
also
plays a pivotal role in controlling
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media
users with such cheerful vibes.
However
, it is rare to read a
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positive
information which
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makes
front page headlines.
For example
,
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some of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
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news
about the vaccine intervention is much-needed to be viral and highlighted in order to encourage citizens to
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get
vaccinated.
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Positive
results from that field
as well
create a comfortable feeling for those who are
still
doubting whether they should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
vaccinated.
Ultimately
, it is
admittedly
that it should form part of editorial policy to carry
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
such as these owing to the fact that of the true fact — it brings a great impact on public morale.

In conclusion
, while I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
that critical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
positive
messages should be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
more publicity, it is
also
necessary for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
media
to continue reporting all the significant
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bad
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story
in
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today
-world.
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IELTS essay It is widely suggested that positive articles should be included in every social media platform. In my opinion, I partly agree with the given statement and my justifications are as follows.

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306 words
6.5
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