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-What single quality is most necessary for success in life?

-What single quality is most necessary for success in life? JYq2k

Firstly everybody wants success life and we study for. This is normal situation. Why do we want a achievement? Question is so simple for me, answer is: everyone has goal and we want reach. How do I reach it, who do help me? Of course, my family. My big answer is family. My family always support me. If I want anything. They don't look, who am I. They just tell go way, own way. I want tell my story. When I was a little girl, I was so fat. One day, my friend told me "you are so fat and you look like a boy. I was so upset. Because I knew I was fat but when my friend told me, I felt terrible and I talked my mom. She said "everything is ok, sometimes it can be this like event" Other day, we went to dietician with my sis and then, I lost a lot of weight. If I correct remember I lost 20 kilos. To lose weight was to hard but my family always support me. They trust me. This is my story. Finally life is hard. Especially if we want a success but if we know, anybody trust as. We do easily it.

Firstly
 everybody You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
wants
 success life and we study for. This is normal situation. Why do we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
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a
 achievement? Question is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 simple for me, answer is: everyone has Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).goal, and
goal and
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want
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help
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, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
. My This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
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family
. My You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 always support me. If I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 anything. They don't look, who am I. They This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 go way, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 way.

I You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 my story. When I was a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 girl, I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
. One day, my friend This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
you are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 and you look like a boy. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 upset. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 I knew I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when my friend This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 me, I felt terrible and I talked my mom. She said Use a smart opening quote here: "“".“
"
everything is ok, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 it can be this like This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".”
"
 Other day, we went to Possible spelling mistake found.dietitian
dietician
 with my sis and then, I lost This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 weight. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 I correct remember I lost 20 kilos. To lose weight was Did you mean "too"?too
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
 always support me. They trust me. This is my story.

Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Finally,
Finally
 life is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
. Especially
 if we You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneedwish
want
 a success This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if we know, anybody trust as. We do easily
 it. 