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What should I start doing in my twenties so I have nothing to regret at 40?

What should I start doing in my twenties so I have nothing to regret at 40? Kw3lN
Let’s me tell you a story. I started working in a tech company on my early 20s, I am 39 years old now. In the corporate world, people move from one department to another and their salary most of the time go up. That was my case, my salary increased average yearly. As a young professional, without experience on taxes, the social media did not exist and zero investment I was happy to buy things that did not add value to me. I had two pickup truck, after a year, I sold them, and I bought the most expensive. That was a terrible idea. I learned that we bought those stuff to show that we are successful. After spending a lot of money helping my family, party out with my friends. At the age of 31, I stopped and told myself, “let’s me put money on blocks and bars”. My down payment was the value of my truck. At this moment, I am paying my apartment slow. However, if I had someone to advise me about investment or how to spend money. I will have different history. It does not mean you do not have to enjoy your life but caution.
Let’s
me
tell
you a story.

I
started
working in a tech
company
on my early 20s, I am 39 years
old
now
. In the corporate world,
people
move
from one department to another and their salary most of the time go up. That was my case, my salary increased average yearly.

As a young professional, without experience on taxes, the social media did not exist and zero investment I was happy to
buy
things that did not
add
value to me.

I had two pickup truck, after a year, I sold them, and I
bought
the most expensive. That was a terrible
idea
. I learned that we
bought
those stuff to
show
that we are successful.

After spending
a lot of
money helping my family, party out with my friends. At the age of 31, I
stopped
and
told
myself, “
let’s
me put money on blocks and bars”. My down payment was the value of my truck.

At this moment, I am paying my apartment slow.
However
, if I had someone to advise me about investment or how to spend money. I will have
different
history.

It does not mean you do not
have to
enjoy your life
but
caution.
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IELTS essay What should I start doing in my twenties so I have nothing to regret at 40?

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
201 words
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