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Language barriers causes difficulty in people moving moving to foreign countries.Discuss

Language barriers causes difficulty in people moving moving to foreign countries. Discuss g5qWl
It is often argued that living in a country where you have to deal with language barriers can cause serious social problems as well as pratical problems. I agree with this statement. Language barriers is one of the main problem that every immigrants should tackle with. People moving abroad may not have the proper knowledge of language of that particular country as a result they have to struggle in day to day activities. For instance, if the people are unable to speak the foreign language, they will surely find difficult in buying day go to day goods. Also find hard to communicate with native people as a result they may feel lonelier. Hence, difficulties in language may create pratical problems in People abroad. Secondly, the immigrants without foreign language feel really hard to get the jobs. As a result unemployment problems mostly lies within the immigrants public. To illustrate, the jobs providing companies mostly prefer the workers with fluent native language and this quality to pronounce native language is lacking in people out from that particular nation so, they need to face the hindrances. Furthermore, they can not enjoy the common rights provided to them as they are unable to communicate with concern authorities like banks and administration. In conclusion, problems like unemployment, feeling of loneliness, depression all are due to language barriers so people before moving to foreign land should have basic knowledge of that particular country.
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argued that living in a country where you
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language
barriers can cause serious social
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pratical
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problems
. I
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agree
with this statement.

Language barriers is one of the main
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problem
that every
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immigrants
should tackle with.
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People
moving abroad may not have the proper knowledge of
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language
of that particular country
as a result
they
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have to
struggle in day to day activities.
For instance
, if the
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people
are unable to speak the foreign
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language
, they will
surely
find difficult in buying day go to day
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goods
.
Also
find
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hard
to communicate with native
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people
as a result
they may feel lonelier.
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, difficulties in
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language
may create
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pratical
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problems
in
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People
abroad.

Secondly
, the immigrants without foreign
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language
feel
really
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to
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get
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a result unemployment
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problems
mostly
lies within the immigrants public. To illustrate, the jobs providing
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companies
mostly
prefer the workers with fluent native
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language
and this quality to pronounce native
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language
is lacking in
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people
out from that particular nation
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so
, they need to face the hindrances.
Furthermore
, they can not enjoy the common rights provided to them as they are unable to communicate with concern authorities like banks and administration.

In conclusion
,
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problems
like unemployment, feeling of loneliness, depression all are due to
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language
barriers
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so
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people
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before
moving to foreign land should have basic knowledge of that particular country.
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IELTS essay Language barriers causes difficulty in people moving moving to foreign countries. Discuss

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