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Working from home,eome think it is beneficial while some people say it may dustract the family routine.Do you agree or disagree.

Working from home, eome think it is beneficial while some people say it may dustract the family routine. m1881
A few individuals think that it is better to work from home while others assert that working from home can disturb the family routine. In my opinion, working from home is not beneficial as it may lead to delayed work completion and health issues. This essay will explain my disagreement followed by a reasoned conclusion. To begin with, doing job in a home setting can cause delayed completion of set task. Briefly, an individual often tend to get easily distracted from work when they are in their home. People priortize household duties and prefer to complete their company work later. Apart from these, there are increased chances of family tension. As there are no time limitations compared to a office goer(fixed duty timings)individuals continue to work for longer period than normal routine, thus spending minimal time with their loved ones. In addition, there is lack of physical activity when a person choose to work in home settings. For instance, a recent study conducted by a multinational company in the US reported that, health issues such as obesity were more among people who worked from home in contrast to a office employee. To conclude, working from home may provide one with convenience of working at anytime. However, I opine that working from home leads to increased family problems, health issues and delayed work completion.
A few individuals
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think
that it is better to
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work
from home while others assert that
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working
from home can disturb the family routine. In my opinion,
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working
from home is not beneficial as it may lead to delayed
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work
completion and health issues. This essay will
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explain
my disagreement followed by a reasoned conclusion.

To
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begin
with, doing job in a home setting can cause delayed completion of set task.
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, an individual
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often
tend to
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get
easily
distracted from
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work
when they are in their home.
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People
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priortize
household duties and prefer to complete their
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company
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work
later. Apart from these, there
are increased
chances of family tension. As there are no time limitations compared to
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a
office goer(
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fixed
duty timings)individuals continue to
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work
for longer period than normal routine,
thus
spending minimal time with their
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loved
ones.

In addition
, there is lack of physical activity when a person choose to
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work
in home settings.
For instance
, a recent study conducted by a multinational
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company
in the US reported that, health issues such as obesity were more among
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people
who worked from home
in contrast
to
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a
office employee.

To conclude
,
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working
from home may provide one with convenience of
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working
at anytime.
However
, I opine that
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working
from home leads to increased family problems, health issues and delayed
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work
completion.
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IELTS essay Working from home, eome think it is beneficial while some people say it may dustract the family routine.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
223 words
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