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what should a government do for a country to become successful. Explain your answer with examples

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It is no wonder that the government plays the basic roll in almost all the processes in the country. it is where all the rules, legislations and new systems are initiated and It has the total functionality in almost all the sectors of the county. Therefore, it is key responsibility rf the government to work towards the development of the country. In order to achieve this several measures can be taken from their end. Firstly, it is very important to take optimum utilization of the resources available in the country. The natural minerals, forests, rivers and other valuable resources in the country has to utilize in a way that can achieve economic growth within the country. Moreover, government need to introduce projects using new technology. For example, by introducing new projects and industries to manufacture finish products from the available resources, rather than exporting the raw materials itself, will results in getting more economic benefits as well as employment opportunities. However, it is important to make this achievement while following the concept of sustainable development. Then this will basically improve the quality of life of all citizens. In addition to this uplifting the education sector with the proper facilities is the other fact that the government needed to focus on. In order to improve the literacy rate of people government can encourage low-income people by providing scholarships for education, also they can give more facilities to schools and collages in rural areas which helps to minimize the inequality of facilities in urban and rural areas. Further, the government also can allocate considerable amount of budget to research and innovation sectors in universities or other relevant organizations. This will help to develop new technologies and innovations which may provide massive benefits for the long-term developments. In conclusion, optimum utilization of resources and the better education system are the two key features which represents the successfulness of a country. The governments have the responsibility to take the necessary steps to improve these two sectors in order to become a successful country.
It is no wonder that the
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government
plays the basic roll in almost all the processes in the
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country
.
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it
is where all the
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rules
,
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legislations
and
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new
systems
are initiated
and It has the total functionality in almost all the
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sectors
of the county.
Therefore
, it is key responsibility
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rf
the
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government
to work towards the development of the
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country
. In order to achieve this several measures can
be taken
from their
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end
.

Firstly
, it is
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very
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important
to take optimum utilization of the resources available in the
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country
. The natural minerals, forests, rivers and other valuable resources in the
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country
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has to
utilize in a way that can achieve economic growth within the
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country
.
Moreover
,
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government
need to introduce projects using
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new
technology.
For example
, by introducing
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new
projects and industries to manufacture finish products from the available resources,
rather
than exporting the raw materials itself, will
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results
in getting more economic benefits
as well
as employment opportunities.
However
, it is
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important
to
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make
this achievement while following the concept of sustainable development. Then this will
basically
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improve
the quality of life of all citizens.

In addition
to this uplifting the education
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sector
with the proper facilities is the other fact that the
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government
needed to focus on. In order to
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improve
the literacy rate of
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people
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government
can encourage low-income
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people
by providing scholarships for education,
also
they can give more facilities to schools and collages in rural areas which
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helps
to minimize the inequality of facilities in urban and rural areas.
Further
, the
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government
also
can allocate considerable amount of budget to research and innovation
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sectors
in universities or other relevant organizations. This will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to develop
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new
technologies and innovations which may provide massive benefits for the long-term developments.

In conclusion
, optimum utilization of resources and the better education system are the two key features which represents the successfulness of a
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country
. The
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governments
have the responsibility to take the necessary steps to
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improve
these two
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sectors
in order to become a successful
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country
.
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IELTS essay what should a government do for a country to become successful. Explain your answer with examples

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