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What qualitiws a friend should have

What qualitiws a friend should have MrWeo
In my oppinions a friends should have some important qualities like trustworthy, Empathetic mutural respect, honesty and loyalty. Let me give u some example First is Trustworthy: You should be able to trust a friend. Whether it’s with your deepest secret or just how dependable your friend is, a friend is someone whom you should always be able to rely on. A good friend cares about your well-being. Even if they don’t always agree with every decision you make, a friend should be empathetic and try to understand your perspective. And the most important trait in a friend is Loyalty. By being loyal and showing that you support your friend, you’ll build a strong relationship. Beside a true friend should stand by the people they call friend during what ever good or bad time because they always say: friend in need are friend indeed So Ngan, what are things that u and your friends can do together
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, you’ll build a strong relationship.

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IELTS essay What qualitiws a friend should have

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
156 words
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