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Causes and Effects of online dating

Causes and Effects of online dating G9deg
It seems to be an increasingly widespread concern that internet dating is more and more popular and it seems like a real date. This essay will discuss some reasons why this has occurred and examine the consequences of this reassuring trend. In the past, before dating, they met and got to know each other for a long time, then officially became a couple. Nowadays, people are living in a world with fast-paced work and lifestyle. They only care about making money so that they can develop themselves and pay for their daily expenses. So they don’t have time to find themselves a suitable girlfriend and have the same opinion. For example, Technology and the use of dating apps such as Tinder have developed easy access to potential partners in a matter of minutes and they need to do is swipe right to meet their soul mates. Consequently, they can find a girlfriend without affecting their productivity. Another important factor contributing to this phenomenon is the impact of the Covid pandemic. Currently, the epidemic situation is complicated, everyone is limited to going out. Therefore, there is little opportunity to interact with others. It's very difficult to find a girlfriend right now. So every boy and girl is looking for a chance by online dating. They won’t waste their time instead just sitting at home doing nothing. The best way is creating our online dating. Of course, this issue is bringing some positive effects to both psychologies and finding a suitable person more easily. Many people carry in themselves a mentality that is always afraid to talk to others. For example, People who are introverted, have a hard time interacting with others. They also find it difficult to approach people, these people feel safe and free to express themselves when they are behind computer screens. As a result of this, online dating may be their best means of finding a date. Moreover, they can find a suitable person more easily because the internet provides a wider selection of men and women. With the various profiles shared online, you can gain access to means of narrowing down your search to suit your need. This is one way of increasing your chances of meeting your dream date. In sum, online dating was created because everyone is too busy with their own lives and is affected by the Covid pandemic. Online dating lead to the phenomenon that people, especially people with social anxiety disorder, will quickly find a girlfriend to date. I think this is the new way to find a hookup, relationship, or even true love. And I also hope everyone will find the right person for themselves.
It seems to be an
increasingly
widespread concern that internet
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dating
is more and more popular and it seems like a real date.

This essay will discuss
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some
reasons why this has occurred and examine the consequences of this reassuring trend.

In the past,
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before
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dating
, they met and
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got
to know each
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other
for a long
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time
, then
officially
became a couple. Nowadays,
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people
are living in a world with
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fast
-paced work and lifestyle. They
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only
care about making money
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so
that they can develop themselves and pay for their daily expenses.
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So
they don’t have
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time
to
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find
themselves a suitable
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girlfriend
and have the same opinion.
For example
, Technology and the
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use
of
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dating
apps such as Tinder have developed easy access to potential partners in a matter of
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minutes and
they need to do is swipe right to
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meet
their soul mates.
Consequently
, they can
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find
a
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girlfriend
without affecting their productivity.

Another
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important
factor contributing to this phenomenon is the impact of the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid
pandemic.
Currently
, the epidemic situation
is complicated
, everyone
is limited
to going out.
Therefore
, there is
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little
opportunity to interact with others. It's
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very
difficult to
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find
a
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girlfriend
right
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now
.
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So
every boy and girl is looking for a chance by
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online
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dating
. They won’t waste their
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time
instead
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just
sitting at home doing nothing. The best way is creating our
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online
dating.

Of course
, this issue is bringing
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some
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positive
effects to both psychologies and finding a suitable person more
easily
.
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Many
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people
carry in themselves a mentality
that is
always afraid to talk to others.
For example
,
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People
who
are introverted
, have a
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hard
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time
interacting with others. They
also
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find
it difficult to approach
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people
, these
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people
feel safe and free to express themselves when they are behind computer screens.
As a result
of this,
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online
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dating
may be their best means of finding a date.
Moreover
, they can
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find
a suitable person more
easily
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because
the internet provides a wider selection of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
men
and women. With the various profiles shared
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
online
, you can gain access to means of narrowing down your search to suit your need. This is one way of increasing your chances of meeting your dream date.

In sum,
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online
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dating
was created
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because
everyone is too busy with their
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own
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lives
and is
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affected
by the
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid
pandemic.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Online
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dating
lead to the phenomenon that
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people
,
especially
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people
with social anxiety disorder, will
quickly
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find
a
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girlfriend
to date. I
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think
this is the new way to
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find
a hookup, relationship, or even true
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love
. And I
also
hope everyone will
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find
the right person for themselves.
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IELTS essay Causes and Effects of online dating

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
444 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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