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essay on trying new things

essay on trying new things 2RQ7J
Some people are excited to visit new places or indulge into newer types of food on the other hand some choose to do things in a traditional way which they are familiar with and don’t like experiments. However, I personally like exploring new cultures, heritage and delicacies and learn more about them. This attitude of trying new things may be applicable to other aspects of life like learning new skills or language. Although I agree that chances of failure may increase when newer things are tried but I strongly believe that advancement in any part of life could happen only if we dare to do new things. Those who are ready to accept the challenge of unknown are more practical in life and have greater advantage in longer term to achieve bigger goals in life as they fail and learn. History has presented us with several examples and Columbus is an ideal example who dared to travel across Atlantic Ocean to explore the unknown side of the planet and discovered new era of life. Doing any work repeatedly make people an expert in their field and this is what probably makes them comfortable, while it does limit them to discover new possibilities. As a result, to explore for better or more, it would require them to come of their comfort zone and expect some surprises. This may not be naturally acceptable to them and hence may be not worth trying even. It may be a never ending debate to prove who is better or offer more advantage over the other but in conclusion, people should dare to try and explore newer things which may to open new avenues and help improve rather than being afraid of them.
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Some
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people
are excited
to visit
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new
places or indulge into newer types of food
on the other hand
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some
choose to do things
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in a traditional way
which they are familiar with and don’t like experiments.
However
, I
personally
like exploring
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new
cultures, heritage and delicacies and learn more about them. This attitude of trying
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new
things may be applicable to other aspects of
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life
like learning
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new
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skills
or language.

Although I
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agree
that chances of failure may increase when newer things
are tried
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but
I
strongly
believe that advancement in any part of
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life
could happen
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only
if we dare to do
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new
things. Those who are ready to accept the challenge of unknown are more practical in
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life
and have greater advantage in longer term to achieve bigger goals in
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life
as they fail and learn. History has presented us with several examples and Columbus is an ideal example who dared to travel
A determiner is probably missing here: "across the Atlantic Ocean".
across Atlantic Ocean
to explore the unknown side of the planet and discovered
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new
era of life.

Doing any work
repeatedly
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make
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people
an expert in their field and this is what
probably
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makes
them comfortable, while it does limit them to discover
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new
possibilities.
As a result
, to explore for better or more, it would require them to
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come
of their comfort zone and
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expect
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some
surprises. This may not be
naturally
acceptable to them and
hence
may be not worth trying even.

It may be a never ending debate to prove who is better or offer more advantage over the other
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but
in conclusion
,
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people
should dare to
"Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "try to" is recommended for writing.
try and
explore newer things which may to open
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new
avenues and
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help
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improve
rather
than being afraid of them.
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IELTS essay essay on trying new things

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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