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A mistake that taugh me an important lesson

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Life is full of difficult and exciting things, so there are mistakes that we make to learn important lessons for ourselves. Me too, I made a mistake that wasn't worth it on a recent test. I still vividly remember that day. It was a Saturday morning, period 4, teacher entered the class and started handing out midterm exam papers to the whole class. When I did the test, I used a pencil to fill in the answer, because it can be easily erased and edited. However, after I finished it, I quickly submitted it and forgot to write it back with a ballpoint pen. I looked around and I still saw a few students doing their homework, at that time I felt a bit insecure but still did not realize where my mistake was. A few days later, when our teacher finished grading the papers, I and some other friends were criticized and got a score of 0. And At that time, I felt angry with myself and very sad about my mistake this time. From that day on, I will never forget that lesson. Because it taught me to be more careful in my studies and that was also an important lesson for me.
Life is full of difficult and exciting things,
so
there are
mistakes
that we
make
to learn
important
lessons for ourselves. Me too, I made a
mistake
that wasn't worth it on a recent
test
.

I
still
vividly
remember that day. It was a Saturday morning, period 4, teacher entered the
class
and
started
handing out midterm exam papers to the whole
class
. When I did the
test
, I
used
a pencil to fill in the answer,
because
it can be
easily
erased and edited.
However
, after I finished it, I
quickly
submitted it and forgot to write it back with a ballpoint pen. I looked around and I
still
saw
a few students doing their homework, at that time I felt a bit insecure
but
still
did not realize where my
mistake
was. A few days later, when our teacher finished grading the papers, I and
some
other friends
were criticized
and
got
a score of 0. And At that time, I felt angry with myself and
very
sad about my
mistake
this time.

From that day on, I will never forget that lesson.
Because
it taught me to be more careful in my studies and that was
also
an
important
lesson for me.
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IELTS essay A mistake that taugh me an important lesson

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