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What qualities that one should have to become successful in life

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What is success? The ability to buy anything we need or the ability to stay happy in any situation. It may differ from person to person percepective. Today I am here to put forth my view to become successful. According to me to become successful individual should work hard and should be deterministic. that is if one wants to a good sports person the he /she should work hard and be firm on his/ her decesion, another qualities may involve being deterministic. At last to sum up I would like to summarize the qualities one should have to become successful in life are being deterministic, hardworking.
What is success? The ability to
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buy
anything we need or the ability to stay happy in any situation. It may differ from person to person
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percepective
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Today
I am here to put forth my view to become successful.

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According to me
to become successful individual should work
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hard
and should be deterministic.
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that
is if one wants to a
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good
sports person
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the he
/she should work
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hard
and be firm on his/ her
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decesion
, another qualities may involve being deterministic.

At last to sum up I would like
to summarize
the qualities one should
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have to
become successful in life are being deterministic, hardworking.

IELTS essay What qualities that one should have to become successful in life

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