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Task 2. Students' gap after collage.

Task 2. Students' gap after collage. PEYOX
There are a huge opinions about students taking a gap before they starting university, most of these comments are negative because people are not comfortable with the idea to suspend professional studies, on the other hand, students are looking for a direction to their lives, and to think about what they want to do. Is comprehensible students choose taking a gap, exist many reasons that students give about the gap, one of this reasons is the strees they have related with school, the tiredness they feel, and the pressure to take an important decision for them. In addition, on my personal point of view, I consider if people is not sure to continue with the university, or they want some time to think about they likies, hobbies or the things they are good, they must have a gap to consider all the aspects involved in their lives to choose the correct decision. By the way, I had experiences from my family, some of them chose a short period of time to got a job, travel around the state, they enjoyed the time spent with their family and firends, and then, they reflected of the way they must follow, and now, the next year they will be graduate from the university. As a conclusion, according with the aspects seen before, is totally understandable students take a gap, also there are people who is prepared to affront the stress load that university represents by itself, in contrast, other point to continuing the career without gap is because of the time, many people believe that you need to finish as soon as possible your school, and then, you will enjoy the life.
There are a huge
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opinions
about
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students
taking a
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gap
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before
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they starting
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university
, most of these comments are
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negative
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because
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people
are not comfortable with the
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idea
to suspend professional studies,
on the other hand
,
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students
are looking for a direction to their
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lives
, and to
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think
about what they want to do. Is comprehensible
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students
choose taking a
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gap
, exist
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many
reasons that
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students
give about the
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gap
, one of
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strees
they have related with school, the tiredness they feel, and the pressure to take an
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important
decision for them.
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, on my personal point of view, I consider if
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people
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is
not sure to continue with the
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university
, or they want
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some
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think
about they
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likies
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have a
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gap
to consider all the aspects involved in their
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lives
to choose the correct decision. By the way, I had experiences from my family,
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some
of them chose a short period of
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a job, travel around the state, they enjoyed the
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spent with their family and
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firends
, and then, they reflected of the way they
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follow, and
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. As a conclusion,
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the aspects
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take a
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,
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who
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load that
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represents by itself,
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gap
is
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of the
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time
,
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many
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people
believe that you need to finish as
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as possible your school, and then, you will enjoy the life.

IELTS essay Task 2. Students' gap after collage.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
279 words
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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