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Nowdays, technology is the most important things, Technology development increases every day, the people discover new technology, and evolution of science help people to treat patients for a huge illness, and if the technology has a negative effect. The technology has many positive effect for people, With the development of technology, so did industry and commerce, and development of internet, Appearance of robots and the development of hospitals and outlets. Although the technology has a negative effect. we have to care about technology, We have to take care, but we have to be careful, because it is possible that the world will be destroyed due to the increasing industries and because it destroys the ozone hole and causes global warming. In conclusion, Technology is a double edged sword that can help the world and can destroy them. We must be careful not to destroy the planet.
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IELTS essay Technology development increases

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