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What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead? 2aWLA
There’re two different types of immigration: legal and illegal. The legal immigration is the fact of having a certified license to live in this new country, it maybe be a passport, a resident card or in some special cases work visa. The illegal immigration is living in a land without having the permission, it happen nautical by small boats or terrestrial by cars. Otherwise the type of the immigration there’s always a reason to leave. There are a lot of reasons for this: - When the homeland is passing by some difficult situations at the point people are running out from it like wars, poverty, high taxes, very high price of living furniture, . - Some people who are living in some countries that don’t respect humans treatments so they leave their countries due of the disrespect government. - There’re people who travel outside their homeland so they can take a higher salary and work in higher grade. - Educational purpose is one of the highest percentage reason people travel to. Immigration effects are mostly positive because when people travel to other countries they take a better education and better work matching in compared to skills that effect positively on the percentage of non-works in and a more
There’re two
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different
types of
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immigration
: legal and illegal.

The legal
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immigration
is the fact of having a certified license to
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live
in this new
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country
, it maybe
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be
a passport, a resident card or in
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some
special cases work visa.

The illegal
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immigration
is living in a land without having the permission, it
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happen
nautical by
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small
boats or terrestrial by cars.

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Otherwise
the type of the
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immigration
there’s always a reason to
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leave
. There are
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a lot of
reasons for this:

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-
When the homeland is passing by
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some
difficult situations at the point
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people
are running out from it like wars, poverty, high taxes,
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very
high price of living furniture
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, .


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-
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Some
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people
who are living in
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some
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countries
that don’t respect humans treatments
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so
they
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leave
their
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countries
due of the disrespect
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government
.

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There’re
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people
who travel outside their homeland
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so
they can take a higher salary and work in higher grade.

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Educational purpose is one of the highest percentage reason
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people
travel to.

Immigration effects are
mostly
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positive
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because
when
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people
travel to other
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countries
they take a better education and better work matching in compared to
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skills
that effect
positively
on the percentage of non-works in and a more

IELTS essay What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
203 words
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