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What problems does this cause

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Nowadays, most people have little time to socialize with their neighbours. This is happened due to the busy life of individuals which is caused by economic problems they tackle with. This essay cites a few causes and provides some solutions to alleviate this issue. The main reason for this problem that the public does not know their neighbours is their busy lives. These days, individuals should work hard in order to provide well-fare for their families. For example, in a nuclear family, both man and woman might have a nine-to-five job in order to earn high revenue. On the other hand, there are always traffic jams in metropolitans, especially in rush hours. So employees are stuck in traffic and spend most of their time commuting. As a result, they have no energy to communicate with their neighbours on weekdays, and at the weekends they want to rest and regain their energy to start the week energetically. However, there are some solutions to make free hours to socialize with each other. Firstly, most countries have some traditional events nations celebrate. People could plan a ceremony to celebrate these special events together. For instance, they could gather in one’s home or if the building has a garden they could meet each other there. In addition, families who have children could let them play with each other and strike a friendship. In this way, the child’s parents meet and get to know others’ parents as well. In conclusion, economic situations and bustling lives are caused society to have less time to know the next-door families. But there are some suggested ways to rectify it, such as celebrating traditional events together or by allowing their children to strike a friendship.

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people
 have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 time to socialize with their Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
. This is happened
 due to the busy life of individuals which is caused
 by economic problems they tackle with. This essay cites a few causes and provides This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 solutions to alleviate this issue.

The main reason for this problem that the public does not know their Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
 is their busy This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
. These days, individuals should work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 in order to provide well-fare for their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
families
. For example
, in a nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
family
, both This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 and woman might have a nine-to-five job in order to earn high revenue. On the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 hand, there are always traffic jams in metropolitans, especially
 in rush hours. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 employees are stuck
 in traffic and spend most of their time commuting. As a result
, they have no energy to communicate with their Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.neighbors
neighbours
 on weekdays, and at the weekends they want to rest and regain their energy to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 the week energetically
.

However
, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 solutions to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 free hours to socialize with each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
. Firstly
, most countries have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 traditional This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 nations celebrate. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
People
 could plan a ceremony to celebrate these special This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 together. For instance
, they could gather in one’s home or if the building has a garden they could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 there. In addition
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
families
 who have children could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 them play with each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
other
 and strike a friendship. In this way, the child’s parents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to know others’ parents as well
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
In
 conclusion, economic situations and bustling This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
are caused
 society to have less time to know the next
-door You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclantribegrouppeoplehousehousehold
families
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 suggested ways to rectify it, such as celebrating traditional This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionshappenings
events
 together or by allowing their children to strike a friendship. 