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The Temple of Literature is a very famous

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The Temple of Literature is a very famous historic and cultural site of Viet Nam. It's established by Ly Thanh Tong in 1076. It was continuingly developed by the later Kings. In the Temple of Literature, there is the Imperial Academy. It was built by the Emperor Ly Nhan Tong. It's considered the first University of Vietnam. And in 1484, Emperor Le Thanh Tong built the first Doctor's stone tablet to memorize the contribution of Doctors. In 2010, the 82 Doctor's stone tablets were recognised as World Heritage by UNESCO. In 2003, Ha Noi People's Committee constructed the four statues of Chu Van An, Ly Thanh Tong, Ly Nhan Tong and Le Thanh Tong to memorize their contribution. Nowadays, the Temple of Literature is visited by a lot of tourists and students every year.
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IELTS essay The Temple of Literature is a very famous

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