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What personal characteristics or skills do you have that will help you in living with a host family? How? Why?

What personal characteristics or skills do you have that will help you in living with a host family? How? Why? m9lkO
Everyone has a different character. Person's character has an important role to communicate. I am very sociable with people and it is not difficult for me to talk with them who I meet first time. As I mentioned above I am enterprising, for instance: when I join to the new group of people or team I get into all of my new friends. It is normal case for me. Not only I am sociable but also I am very careful with all people in my family and around me. Caring about their health and happiness is enjoyable to me. Moreover, I am talented at cooking and doing house works. I can do all of them excellent. For instance, on holidays and weekends I make my family happy by cooking different delicious meals and cookies. It means that, I can help the members of my host family to prepare supper with pleasure. In addition, I am good at gardening too. Every weekends and on my free time, I help to my parents watering seedlings, planting and softening the yard land. We take awesome harvest from our garden and spend to daily needs. What is more, one of my feature aspect is being orderly and neat that I clean houses together with my sister and mom. Cleanness and purity is my motto. I can be responsible for cleaning house chores with my host family. Subsequently, I am interested in IT (Information Technology) and I studied at Web coding course. If children of my host parents are interested in this facility, I am able to share my modern knowledge with them. Summing up, from my point of view I can be native member of my host family because humanity is a good community for each of us.
Everyone has a
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different
character. Person's character has an
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important
role to communicate.

I am
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very
sociable with
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people
and it is not difficult for me to talk with them who I
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meet
first
time. As I mentioned above I am enterprising,
for instance
: when I
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join
to the new group of
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people
or team I
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get
into all of my new friends. It is normal case for me. Not
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only
I am sociable
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but
also
I am
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very
careful with all
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people
in my
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family
and around me. Caring about their health and happiness is enjoyable to me.
Moreover
, I
am talented
at cooking and doing
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house
works. I can do all of them excellent.
For instance
, on holidays and weekends I
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make
my
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family
happy by cooking
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different
delicious meals and cookies. It means that, I can
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help
the members of my
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host
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family
to prepare supper with pleasure.

In addition
, I am
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good
at gardening too. Every weekends and on my free time, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
to my parents watering seedlings, planting and softening the yard land. We take awesome harvest from our garden and spend to daily needs.
What is more
, one of my feature aspect is being orderly and neat that I clean
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
houses
together with my sister and mom. Cleanness and purity is my motto. I can be responsible for cleaning
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house
chores with my
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host
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family
.
Subsequently
, I
am interested
in IT (Information Technology) and I studied at Web coding course. If children of my
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host
parents
are interested
in this facility, I am able to share my modern knowledge with them.

Summing up, from my point of view I can be native member of my
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host
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family
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because
humanity is a
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good
community for each of us.
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IELTS essay What personal characteristics or skills do you have that will help you in living with a host family? How? Why?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
294 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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