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Task 2 , writing , over packaging of products

Task 2, writing, over packaging of products 8LpqV

There is no denying that, nowadays packaging of a number of products is overly done, which is not only costing the consumers but also environment. While, many people say that producer is responsible for curtailing this issue, some think that consumers should steer clear of over packaged products. Let us examine both the views before reaching a concrete decision. To begin with, the main problem of excessive packaging is, usage of a significant amount of plastic which is non bio degradable, therefore accumulating in the soil after disposal. For instance, online products are first packed in a small cardboard box, then bubble wrap made of plastic is wrapped around it, which in turn goes into an another large box and is sealed using plasters. Furthermore, the cardboard unfortunately augments co2 emission. On the other hand, over packaging shoots up the prices significantly. Therefore, minimal packaging makes it cost-effective to the buyers. This is a tactic used by the producers, in order to make the product look appealing, thus, attracting potential customers. To cite an example, in various burger joints, burgers are first wrapped in a paper and then put in a cardboard container which is then handed to us in a paper bag. Instead of doing this, if it simply served in the container it would alleviate the cost. To sum up, usage of more plastic and also, surprisingly high prices are the major effects of over packaging. I believe that, the responsibility lies within the producer, who by taking sustainable measures can make packaging of products more economical and environment friendly.

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packaging
 of a number of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 is overly
 done, which is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 costing the consumers This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 environment. While, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 say that producer is responsible for curtailing this issue, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that consumers should steer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 of over packaged You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 us examine both the views This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 reaching a concrete decision.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the main problem of excessive You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadgatherbindstowbundlecollect
packaging
 is, usage of a significant amount of plastic which is non bio degradable, therefore
 accumulating in the soil after disposal. For instance
, online You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 are first
 packed in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 cardboard box, then bubble wrap made of plastic is wrapped
 around it, which in turn goes into One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: "a large" or "another large".a largeanother large
an another large
 box and is sealed
 using plasters. Furthermore
, the cardboard unfortunately augments co2 emission.

On the other hand
, over You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadgatherbindstowbundlecollect
packaging
 shoots up the prices significantly
. Therefore
, minimal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadgatherbindstowbundlecollect
packaging
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 it cost-effective to the buyers. This is a tactic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 by the producers, in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
product
 look appealing, thus
, attracting potential customers. To cite an example, in various burger joints, burgers are first
 wrapped in a paper and then put in a cardboard container which is then handed to us in a paper bag. Instead
 of doing this, if it simply
 served in the container it would alleviate the cost.

To sum up, usage of more plastic and also
, surprisingly
 high prices are the major effects of over You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadgatherbindstowbundlecollect
packaging
. I believe that, the responsibility lies within the producer, who by taking sustainable measures can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloadgatherbindstowbundlecollect
packaging
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
 more economical and environment friendly. 