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what makes society follow the trends and social standards? 85d1l
A science fiction novel written by Phillip K. Dick with the title Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep has thousands of lessons for its readers. The novel talks about the human nature. The story underlines several matters that people may face in their life which reflects on how human lives their life in the future. Starting from people’s dependency to the technologies, the influence of mass media, false religion, consumerism, less empathy, false identity, mind control, and many more. When I read the book, I noted that Deckard, the main character in the novel is living with the idea of consumerism whereby he has an envy feeling for the other people who can afford exotic animals. In the book, people use the real animal to greater their social acceptance. They buy fancy things even though they do not really need it. Consumerism is the talking point in the novel that will be discussed in this paper along with the main character in the novel, Rick Deckard, a bounty hunter who wants to kill the nexus-6 in order to buy real sheep to impress his neighbours. Consumerism refers to the idea of purchasing goods which is always increasing and it makes people being obsessive about it and feels that their well-being and happiness depends on the obtaining those goods, specially fancy things. In relation, their thoughts are influence by the mass media through the advertisement that. In addition, the meaning of consumerism in the novel is also related to the sense of envy within the community in real life. Normally, self-esteem, prestige, and life style are the internal factors that lead someone to consumerism and competition. Rick Deckard represents the idea of consumerism that categorize into life standard in the humanity described in the book whereby Rick Deckard is obsessed to consumerism, in this case to buy real animal as by having a real animal is confirming that his social rank is high according to the standard that exists in that society (Dick, 1968, p. 5). In Indonesia, social competition among the people happens. The society is competing to afford luxuries such as branded goods to increase their social ranks. The worst case is about those who are willing to do anything in order to achieve their goals which includes to lift their social status. The writer found that the subject consumerism and social competition is interesting because it reflects to the lifestyle of the people living in the modern society. Rick Deckard and consumerism in the book showing something similar on how society lives nowadays. Additionally, the question is about what is wrong with our society nowadays, Why society should care about the luxurious goods and social competition? . In real life, due to the consumerism, many people are competing to evaluate their social status by buying fancy things. For instance, the latest release of branded bag, clothes, exotic animals, and many more. This shows that people follow the community standard, and using the expenssive goods and exotic animals to confirm their social degree. As several chapters of the book Do Android Dream of Electric Sheep? and Indonesian news provided evidences and facts regarding the topic of this paper, it reveals the correlation between the main character in the story and the lifestyle of the Indonesian community. It leads to hypothesis that people nowadays and society described in the Phillip’s book use luxurious animals and goods to measure their social ranks as they indeed concern about it. Therefore they compete and willing to do anything for it, even families. However, the question is why they should do it? . In the novel, Rick Deckard’s behaviours confirms that he is selfish and greedy for animals with expensive price just to impress his neighbours. Hence, he killed the Nexus-6 androids in order to afford a real animal. It is clearly indicated that Rick Deckard does not care how can he afford his desirable pet, what matter is to buy it as form the social standpoint it has to be done. It means that Rick Deckard indeed attempts to follow the standards in his society. Over here in Indonesia we can see the same points as written in the Phillip Dick’s book, it is about the consumerism and competition among the people. There is considerable celebrities, socialites and elites who have a desire of owning fancy things and exotic pets (Pasha, 2019) which is similar to Rick Deckard’s wish. This is proven by the news and references provided in the finding session whereby there is a trend and social standard created among them to possess luxurious stuff and pets. For instance, Marion Jola, singer who recognized that she ever bought a branded bag because of her prestige as there is a community standard of owning luxurious things from her surroundings. The other one is a socialite who stole a Luis Vuitton handbag as her surroundings have branded bag as the social standard (Beers, 2020) whereby this example is related to Rick Deckard who became a bounty hunter to buy his desirable pet. Furthermore, the trend of owning an exotic pet within the celebrities and exclusive groups. It can be noted from the YouTube channel of several celebrities. For example, mass media and the YouTube channel that exhibit Irfan Hakim’s exotic pet, Aldabra tortoise, Alshad Ahmad’s Bengal tiger, Raditya Dika’s sphynx cat, and so much more (Pasha, 2019). This asserts the correlation between the concept of consumerism in the book and Indonesian society whereby people’s envy feeling and prestige resulted them to follow the trends and social standards in order to their social ranks even though in fact they do not really need it. The factors that influencing the society to follow the trends and social standard are varied. The external and internal factors. Social environment and mass media are the external factors as they have influence someone’s way of thinking through advertisement. The impact of the mass media here supports the concept of consumerism as it makes the community happy if they can purchase what everyone else affording and have a sense of envy towards each other. Hence, it leads to competition between the community as if they are not participate in the game, somehow they will be ashamed. Even those who are unable to afford fancy things enforce themselves to buy what the elite groups buying. Followed by internal factors which constitutes by life style, sense of envy, and prestige. Both two factors are the main element in influencing someone’s decision whether to follow the trends and social standard or not. The principal reasons of having branded goods are prestige for most of people, mainly the celebrities and elite groups in Indonesia. Accordingly someone’s prestige relies on the things and services that he/she use, which in further became his/her life style. Using branded stuff makes people become more comfortable and confirms their social rank. In fact, those groups of people will merely feel ashamed if they do not owning branded stuff because they afraid of being judged as a lower class people from their social environment. This shows that those people seek for recognition as they feel they need acceptance from other people to feel good about themselves. The root causes of this are sense of envy, lack of self-esteem and confidence as it is socially constructed, that an individual should follow the community standard so that he or she will not be subject to bullying. As a result of this social phenomenon, it can decrease life-satisfaction and happiness as their happiness is measured by owning luxurious goods and the community might find it difficult to admit themselves and be confident for who they really are. In addition, perhaps it will be hard for them to live in peace as they tend to join the social competition for social acceptance which it could raise anxiety and depression if they fail to reach acceptance from the other. In conclusion, by all the proven results, I do believe that consumerism and social competition exist in Indonesian society. It is true fancy things and exotic animals are the trends and social standard that are used by the society as a symbol of their social class. The Society indeed follows the trends and standards that are socially constructed as they are envious, prestige, and seek for acceptance from other people to feel good about themselves by impressing the community. It is proven by the findings section from the novel whereby Rick Deckard is jealous of his neighbours who just afforded a real animal. Therefore, he has a desire to afford a real animal just to impress his neighbours by doing anything. Subsequently, Indonesian society mainly the celebrities and elite groups owning branded goods and exotic animals to impress the society even though they do not really need it. . Both findings from novel “Do Android Dream of Electric Sheep? ” and the lifestyle of Indonesian society has the same idea of describing the consumerism in the book and real life in Indonesia. The matter here is the human nature of being greedy when they are obsessed with something, taking risk will be their last means to reach it. The author of the book “Do Android Dream of Electric Sheep? ” described the reality in this current society in his work. He defines the society who owns several luxurious goods and animals which are not necessarily needed. If this social phenomenon continues to happen in the future, society will be more rely on the fancy things and social acceptance to give them long-lasting happiness and self-satisfaction.
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celebrities
and
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elite
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
groups
in Indonesia.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Accordingly
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someone’s
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prestige
relies on the things and services that he/she
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
, which in
further
became his/her
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life
style. Using
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branded
stuff
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
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people
become more comfortable and confirms their
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social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
rank
. In fact, those
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groups
of
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people
will
merely
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feel
ashamed if they do not
After the auxiliary verb 'do', use the base form of a verb. Did you mean "own"?
owning
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branded
stuff
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
You miss the verb here. You should rather write: "they're afraid".
they afraid
of
being judged
as a lower
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
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people
from their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
environment. This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
shows
that those
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people
seek for recognition as they
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feel
they
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need
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
acceptance
from
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other
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people
to
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feel
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
about themselves. The root causes of this are
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sense
of
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envy
, lack of self-esteem and confidence as it is
socially
constructed, that an individual should
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follow
the
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community
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
standard
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that he or she will not be subject to bullying.
As a result
of this
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social
phenomenon, it can decrease life-satisfaction and
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happiness
as their
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happiness
is measured
by
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owning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
luxurious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
goods
and the
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community
might find it difficult to admit themselves and be confident for
In a formal text, use "whom", not 'who'.
who
they
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really
are.
In addition
, perhaps it will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
for them to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in peace as they tend to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
the
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social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
competition
for
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social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
acceptance
which it could raise anxiety and depression if they fail to reach
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
acceptance
from the other.

In conclusion
, by all the proven results, I do believe that consumerism and
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social
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competition
exist in Indonesian
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society
. It is true
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fancy
things and
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exotic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
are the
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trends
and
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social
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standard
that are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
by the
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society
as a symbol of their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
. The
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Society
indeed
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follows
the
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trends
and
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standards
that are
socially
constructed as they are envious,
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prestige
, and seek for
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acceptance
from
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other
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people
to
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feel
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good
about themselves by impressing the
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community
. It
is proven
by the findings section from the
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novel
whereby Rick
Possible spelling mistake found.
Deckard
is jealous of his
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.
neighbours
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who
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
afforded a
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real
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animal
.
Therefore
, he has a desire to
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afford
a
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real
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animal
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
to
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impress
his
Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbours' is British English.
neighbours
by doing anything.
Subsequently
, Indonesian
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society
mainly
the
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celebrities
and
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elite
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groups
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
owning
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
branded
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
goods
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
exotic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
impress
the
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society
even though
they do not
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really
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
need
it.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Both findings from
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novel
“Do Android
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Dream
of
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Electric
Sheep? ” and the lifestyle of Indonesian
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society
has the same
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idea
of describing the consumerism in the
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book
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
real
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
in Indonesia. The matter here is the human nature of being greedy when they
are obsessed
with something, taking
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
will be their last means to reach it. The author of the
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book
“Do Android
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Dream
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Electric
Sheep? ”
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
described
the reality in this
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
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society
in his work. He defines the
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society
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who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owns
several
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
luxurious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
goods
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
animals
which are not
necessarily
needed. If this
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social
phenomenon continues to happen in the future,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
will be more rely on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
fancy
things and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
acceptance
to give them long-lasting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
happiness
and self-satisfaction.

IELTS essay what makes society follow the trends and social standards?

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
1589 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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