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what makes society follow the trends and social standards ?

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A science fiction novel written by Phillip K. Dick with the title Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep has thousands of lessons for its readers. The novel talks about the human nature. The story underlines several matters that people may face in their life which reflects on how human lives their life in the future. Starting from people’s dependency to the technologies, the influence of mass media, false religion, consumerism, less empathy, false identity, mind control, and many more. When I read the book, I noted that Deckard, the main character in the novel is living with the idea of consumerism whereby he has an envy feeling for the other people who can afford exotic animals. In the book, people use the real animal to greater their social acceptance. They buy fancy things even though they do not really need it. Consumerism is the talking point in the novel that will be discussed in this paper along with the main character in the novel, Rick Deckard, a bounty hunter who wants to kill the nexus-6 in order to buy real sheep to impress his neighbours. Consumerism refers to the idea of purchasing goods which is always increasing and it makes people being obsessive about it and feels that their well-being and happiness depends on the obtaining those goods, specially fancy things. In relation, their thoughts are influence by the mass media through the advertisement that. In addition, the meaning of consumerism in the novel is also related to the sense of envy within the community in real life. Normally, self-esteem, prestige, and life style are the internal factors that lead someone to consumerism and competition. Rick Deckard represents the idea of consumerism that categorize into life standard in the humanity described in the book whereby Rick Deckard is obsessed to consumerism, in this case to buy real animal as by having a real animal is confirming that his social rank is high according to the standard that exists in that society (Dick, 1968, p. 5). In Indonesia, social competition among the people happens. The society is competing to afford luxuries such as branded goods to increase their social ranks. The worst case is about those who are willing to do anything in order to achieve their goals which includes to lift their social status. The writer found that the subject consumerism and social competition is interesting because it reflects to the lifestyle of the people living in the modern society. Rick Deckard and consumerism in the book showing something similar on how society lives nowadays. Additionally, the question is about what is wrong with our society nowadays, Why society should care about the luxurious goods and social competition? . In real life, due to the consumerism, many people are competing to evaluate their social status by buying fancy things. For instance, the latest release of branded bag, clothes, exotic animals, and many more. This shows that people follow the community standard, and using the expenssive goods and exotic animals to confirm their social degree. As several chapters of the book Do Android Dream of Electric Sheep? and Indonesian news provided evidences and facts regarding the topic of this paper, it reveals the correlation between the main character in the story and the lifestyle of the Indonesian community. It leads to hypothesis that people nowadays and society described in the Phillip’s book use luxurious animals and goods to measure their social ranks as they indeed concern about it. Therefore they compete and willing to do anything for it, even families. However, the question is why they should do it? . In the novel, Rick Deckard’s behaviours confirms that he is selfish and greedy for animals with expensive price just to impress his neighbours. Hence, he killed the Nexus-6 androids in order to afford a real animal. It is clearly indicated that Rick Deckard does not care how can he afford his desirable pet, what matter is to buy it as form the social standpoint it has to be done. It means that Rick Deckard indeed attempts to follow the standards in his society. Over here in Indonesia we can see the same points as written in the Phillip Dick’s book, it is about the consumerism and competition among the people. There is considerable celebrities, socialites and elites who have a desire of owning fancy things and exotic pets (Pasha, 2019) which is similar to Rick Deckard’s wish. This is proven by the news and references provided in the finding session whereby there is a trend and social standard created among them to possess luxurious stuff and pets. For instance, Marion Jola, singer who recognized that she ever bought a branded bag because of her prestige as there is a community standard of owning luxurious things from her surroundings. The other one is a socialite who stole a Luis Vuitton handbag as her surroundings have branded bag as the social standard (Beers, 2020) whereby this example is related to Rick Deckard who became a bounty hunter to buy his desirable pet. Furthermore, the trend of owning an exotic pet within the celebrities and exclusive groups. It can be noted from the YouTube channel of several celebrities. For example, mass media and the YouTube channel that exhibit Irfan Hakim’s exotic pet, Aldabra tortoise, Alshad Ahmad’s Bengal tiger, Raditya Dika’s sphynx cat, and so much more (Pasha, 2019). This asserts the correlation between the concept of consumerism in the book and Indonesian society whereby people’s envy feeling and prestige resulted them to follow the trends and social standards in order to their social ranks even though in fact they do not really need it. The factors that influencing the society to follow the trends and social standard are varied. The external and internal factors. Social environment and mass media are the external factors as they have influence someone’s way of thinking through advertisement. The impact of the mass media here supports the concept of consumerism as it makes the community happy if they can purchase what everyone else affording and have a sense of envy towards each other. Hence, it leads to competition between the community as if they are not participate in the game, somehow they will be ashamed. Even those who are unable to afford fancy things enforce themselves to buy what the elite groups buying. Followed by internal factors which constitutes by life style, sense of envy, and prestige. Both two factors are the main element in influencing someone’s decision whether to follow the trends and social standard or not. The principal reasons of having branded goods are prestige for most of people, mainly the celebrities and elite groups in Indonesia. Accordingly someone’s prestige relies on the things and services that he/she use, which in further became his/her life style. Using branded stuff makes people become more comfortable and confirms their social rank. In fact, those groups of people will merely feel ashamed if they do not owning branded stuff because they afraid of being judged as a lower class people from their social environment. This shows that those people seek for recognition as they feel they need acceptance from other people to feel good about themselves. The root causes of this are sense of envy, lack of self-esteem and confidence as it is socially constructed, that an individual should follow the community standard so that he or she will not be subject to bullying. As a result of this social phenomenon, it can decrease life-satisfaction and happiness as their happiness is measured by owning luxurious goods and the community might find it difficult to admit themselves and be confident for who they really are. In addition, perhaps it will be hard for them to live in peace as they tend to join the social competition for social acceptance which it could raise anxiety and depression if they fail to reach acceptance from the other. In conclusion, by all the proven results, I do believe that consumerism and social competition exist in Indonesian society. It is true fancy things and exotic animals are the trends and social standard that are used by the society as a symbol of their social class. The Society indeed follows the trends and standards that are socially constructed as they are envious, prestige, and seek for acceptance from other people to feel good about themselves by impressing the community. It is proven by the findings section from the novel whereby Rick Deckard is jealous of his neighbours who just afforded a real animal. Therefore, he has a desire to afford a real animal just to impress his neighbours by doing anything. Subsequently, Indonesian society mainly the celebrities and elite groups owning branded goods and exotic animals to impress the society even though they do not really need it. . Both findings from novel “Do Android Dream of Electric Sheep? ” and the lifestyle of Indonesian society has the same idea of describing the consumerism in the book and real life in Indonesia. The matter here is the human nature of being greedy when they are obsessed with something, taking risk will be their last means to reach it. The author of the book “Do Android Dream of Electric Sheep? ” described the reality in this current society in his work. He defines the society who owns several luxurious goods and animals which are not necessarily needed. If this social phenomenon continues to happen in the future, society will be more rely on the fancy things and social acceptance to give them long-lasting happiness and self-satisfaction.
A science fiction
novel
written by Phillip K. Dick with the title Do Androids
Dream
of
Electric
Sheep has thousands of lessons for its readers. The
novel
talks about the human nature. The story underlines several matters that
people
may face in their
life
which reflects on how human
lives
their
life
in the future. Starting from
people’s
dependency to the technologies, the influence of
mass
media
, false religion, consumerism, less empathy, false identity, mind control, and
many
more. When I read the
book
, I noted that
Deckard
, the
main
character in the
novel
is living with the
idea
of consumerism whereby he has an
envy
feeling for the
other
people
who
can
afford
exotic
animals
. In the
book
,
people
use
the
real
animal
to greater their
social
acceptance
. They
buy
fancy
things
even though
they do not
really
need
it. Consumerism is the talking point in the
novel
that will
be discussed
in this paper along with the
main
character in the
novel
, Rick
Deckard
, a bounty hunter
who
wants to kill the nexus-6 in
order
to
buy
real
sheep to
impress
his
neighbours
. Consumerism refers to the
idea
of purchasing
goods
which is always increasing and it
makes
people
being obsessive about it and
feels
that their well-being and
happiness
depends on the obtaining those
goods
,
specially
fancy
things. In relation, their thoughts are influence by the
mass
media
through the advertisement that.
In addition
, the meaning of consumerism in the
novel
is
also
related to the
sense
of
envy
within the
community
in
real
life
.
Normally
, self-esteem,
prestige
, and
life
style are the internal
factors
that lead
someone
to consumerism and competition.

Rick
Deckard
represents the
idea
of consumerism that categorize into
life
standard
in the humanity
described
in the
book
whereby Rick
Deckard
is obsessed
to consumerism,
in this case
to
buy
real
animal
as by having a
real
animal
is confirming that his
social
rank
is high according to the
standard
that exists in that
society
(Dick, 1968, p. 5). In Indonesia,
social
competition
among the
people
happens
. The
society
is competing to
afford
luxuries such as
branded
goods
to increase their
social
ranks
. The worst case is about those
who
are willing to do anything in
order
to achieve their goals which includes to lift their
social
status.
The
writer found that the subject consumerism and
social
competition
is interesting
because
it reflects to the lifestyle of the
people
living in the modern
society
. Rick
Deckard
and consumerism in the
book
showing something similar on how
society
lives
nowadays.
Additionally
, the question is about what is
wrong
with our
society
nowadays, Why
society
should care about the
luxurious
goods
and
social
competition
?
.
In
real
life
, due to the consumerism,
many
people
are competing to evaluate their
social
status by buying
fancy
things.
For instance
, the latest release of
branded
bag, clothes,
exotic
animals
, and
many
more. This
shows
that
people
follow
the
community
standard
, and using the
expenssive
goods
and
exotic
animals
to confirm their
social
degree.

As several chapters of the
book
Do Android
Dream
of
Electric
Sheep?
and
Indonesian news provided evidences and facts regarding the topic of this paper, it reveals the correlation between the
main
character in the story and the lifestyle of the Indonesian
community
. It leads to hypothesis that
people
nowadays and
society
described
in the Phillip’s
book
use
luxurious
animals
and
goods
to measure their
social
ranks
as they
indeed
concern about it.
Therefore
they compete and willing to do anything for it, even families.
However
, the question is why they should do it?
.
In the
novel
, Rick
Deckard
’s
behaviours
confirms that he is selfish and greedy for
animals
with expensive price
just
to
impress
his
neighbours
.
Hence
, he killed the Nexus-6 androids in
order
to
afford
a
real
animal
. It is
clearly
indicated that Rick
Deckard
does not care how can he
afford
his desirable pet, what matter is to
buy
it as form the
social
standpoint it
has to
be done
. It means that Rick
Deckard
indeed
attempts to
follow
the
standards
in his society.

Over here in Indonesia we can
see
the same points as written in the Phillip Dick’s
book
, it is about the consumerism and
competition
among the
people
. There is considerable
celebrities
, socialites and
elites
who
have a desire of
owning
fancy
things and
exotic
pets
(Pasha, 2019) which is similar to Rick
Deckard
’s wish. This
is proven
by the news and references provided in the finding session whereby there is a
trend
and
social
standard
created among them to possess
luxurious
stuff and
pets
.
For instance
, Marion
Jola
, singer
who
recognized that she ever
bought
a
branded
bag
because
of her
prestige
as there is a
community
standard
of
owning
luxurious
things from her surroundings. The
other
one is a socialite
who
stole a Luis Vuitton handbag as her surroundings have
branded
bag as the
social
standard
(Beers, 2020) whereby this example
is related
to Rick
Deckard
who
became a bounty hunter to
buy
his desirable pet.
Furthermore
, the
trend
of
owning
an
exotic
pet within the
celebrities
and exclusive
groups
. It can
be noted
from the YouTube channel of several
celebrities
.
For example
,
mass
media
and the YouTube channel that exhibit
Irfan
Hakim
’s
exotic
pet,
Aldabra
tortoise,
Alshad
Ahmad’s Bengal tiger,
Raditya
Dika
’s
sphynx
cat, and
so
much more (Pasha, 2019). This asserts the correlation between the concept of consumerism in the
book
and Indonesian
society
whereby
people’s
envy
feeling and
prestige
resulted them to
follow
the
trends
and
social
standards
in
order
to their
social
ranks
even though
in fact they do not
really
need
it.

The
factors
that influencing the
society
to
follow
the
trends
and
social
standard
are varied
. The external and internal
factors
.
Social
environment and
mass
media
are the external
factors
as they have influence
someone’s
way of thinking through advertisement. The impact of the
mass
media
here supports the concept of consumerism as it
makes
the
community
happy if they can
purchase
what everyone else affording and have a
sense
of
envy
towards each
other
.
Hence
, it leads to
competition
between the
community
as if they are not
participate
in the game, somehow they will
be ashamed
. Even those
who
are unable to
afford
fancy
things enforce themselves to
buy
what the
elite
groups
buying. Followed by internal
factors
which constitutes by
life
style,
sense
of
envy
, and
prestige
. Both two
factors
are the
main
element in influencing
someone’s
decision whether to
follow
the
trends
and
social
standard
or not. The principal reasons of having
branded
goods
are
prestige
for most of
people
,
mainly
the
celebrities
and
elite
groups
in Indonesia.
Accordingly
someone’s
prestige
relies on the things and services that he/she
use
, which in
further
became his/her
life
style. Using
branded
stuff
makes
people
become more comfortable and confirms their
social
rank
. In fact, those
groups
of
people
will
merely
feel
ashamed if they do not
owning
branded
stuff
because
they afraid
of
being judged
as a lower
class
people
from their
social
environment. This
shows
that those
people
seek for recognition as they
feel
they
need
acceptance
from
other
people
to
feel
good
about themselves. The root causes of this are
sense
of
envy
, lack of self-esteem and confidence as it is
socially
constructed, that an individual should
follow
the
community
standard
so
that he or she will not be subject to bullying.
As a result
of this
social
phenomenon, it can decrease life-satisfaction and
happiness
as their
happiness
is measured
by
owning
luxurious
goods
and the
community
might find it difficult to admit themselves and be confident for
who
they
really
are.
In addition
, perhaps it will be
hard
for them to
live
in peace as they tend to
join
the
social
competition
for
social
acceptance
which it could raise anxiety and depression if they fail to reach
acceptance
from the other.

In conclusion
, by all the proven results, I do believe that consumerism and
social
competition
exist in Indonesian
society
. It is true
fancy
things and
exotic
animals
are the
trends
and
social
standard
that are
used
by the
society
as a symbol of their
social
class
. The
Society
indeed
follows
the
trends
and
standards
that are
socially
constructed as they are envious,
prestige
, and seek for
acceptance
from
other
people
to
feel
good
about themselves by impressing the
community
. It
is proven
by the findings section from the
novel
whereby Rick
Deckard
is jealous of his
neighbours
who
just
afforded a
real
animal
.
Therefore
, he has a desire to
afford
a
real
animal
just
to
impress
his
neighbours
by doing anything.
Subsequently
, Indonesian
society
mainly
the
celebrities
and
elite
groups
owning
branded
goods
and
exotic
animals
to
impress
the
society
even though
they do not
really
need
it.
.
Both findings from
novel
“Do Android
Dream
of
Electric
Sheep? ” and the lifestyle of Indonesian
society
has the same
idea
of describing the consumerism in the
book
and
real
life
in Indonesia. The matter here is the human nature of being greedy when they
are obsessed
with something, taking
risk
will be their last means to reach it. The author of the
book
“Do Android
Dream
of
Electric
Sheep? ”
described
the reality in this
current
society
in his work. He defines the
society
who
owns
several
luxurious
goods
and
animals
which are not
necessarily
needed. If this
social
phenomenon continues to happen in the future,
society
will be more rely on the
fancy
things and
social
acceptance
to give them long-lasting
happiness
and self-satisfaction.
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