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what makes a good sports center

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In daily life, sports activities play a very important role in improving our health. But it is a fact that not everyone has the conditions to be able to play their favorite sports at home, so we need a good fitness center. For me, a good sports center needs three conditions. The first is location. A sports center must have a good location. No one wants to go to a sports center far from where they live because commuting takes a long time. Sports centers must be close to residential areas and main roads for people to travel more conveniently. The second thing is the facilities. The center must be fully equipped with modern equipment for all sports such as gymnasium, swimming pool, indoor and outdoor ball courts, tennis courts, badminton, basketball, . . . and Gymnastics multi-purpose area. In addition, the center can organize sports competitions and events. Finally, the good thing about a sports center is that it can be used by everyone from children, the elderly and the disabled.
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IELTS essay what makes a good sports center

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
172 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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