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What magazines are popular now?

What magazines are popular now? Well magazine popular magazine I think are the gossip ones because nowadays people is interested in famous people and celebrities being captured in doing things strange things or maybe some celebrity couples and stuff like that so maybe the most popular ones are the gossip magazines especially in my country Italy but maybe even the ones that brings knowledge to the table can be popular as well. What are the differences between men and women in reading magazines? Yeah I think that the the women are reading mostly gossip magazine like I said before instead of men that read a lot of knowledge magazines like specific ones in the in different sectors and maybe the differences another difference could be that Woman reading more about cooking magazines and men are ready more about navigation magazines or I don't know which ones. What are different kinds of magazines? Like I said before there are different kinds of magazines like the gossip ones, the cooking ones, the the natural and adventurous magazines or you could find informatic magazine or maybe manufacturing magazines. So there are different type of magazine. Not every kinds of magazines is popular but there are different ones Do people in your country like reading magazines or books more? I think in Italy there are many magazines reader but at the same time books are very popular because we have a strong literature culture so I think books are very popular. So I would like to say that books are more popular than magazines in Italy. Do people in countryside read the same kinds of magazines as people in the city? Well maybe the countryside reader readers of magazines are more about the countryside living topics, magazines that represents their life in country side instead of people in the city that are more likely to read gossip magazines so different types of magazines Do you think magazines one day can disappear? Yes I think that the magazine one day can disappear because of the development of technology and mobile devices. You can read about everything on your phone, on your computer and purchase a magazine, a paper magazine, in its less convenient and may be slower than reading something on an electronic device so maybe magazines one day can disappear for real but maybe not because paper base magazines maybe have has as a strong culture and but most likely they can disappear in the future. What are the differences between newspaper and magazine? I think that the the main difference is that newspaper of more about news in general Part 2 Describe an interesting journey you have been on. You should say: where you went how you travelled there who you went with and explain what was so memorable about the journey. I would like to talk about a journey I did in 2019 in united states in particular in New York. I went in New York by airplane from Milano Malpensa with my two older and classmate of high school Matteo and Giovanni and one friends that were waiting for me in New York because he is studying he is actually studying there. It was a beautiful and an emotional journey because USA, in particular New York for me, is a very inspiring city and a beautiful one to visit and spend some time. Everything is bigger than European cities and I really like how you can visit the city; how you can visit museums and places you can't find the other countries and other city even if in the U S. So It was a beautiful and an inspiring moment for me and it motivates it motivated me so much and I was really fun, my friends are so special to me so. it was really memorable journey that I made in my life, one of the most. Part 3 How important is it to have adventure in our lives? I think it's very important to have adventures in our life different experiences that makes make us growing and learning for mistakes from mistakes and from situation that we didn't encounter before. So I think having different adventures is really important and it is a need for growing up. What do people learn about themselves from having adventures? Yes as I said before people learn about different things of their self of their attitude in different experiences that adventures make a cure in our life because when you do something different you your behavior your effort is different and you can learn about different mistakes different feeling different situation and all of that make you growing up How do you think people will travel in the future? I think that with this different situation on dramatically change of the travelling due to this a pandemic virus people will change the way with today travel but I don't know in which sense because in this times that there is so much uncertain things and I don't know it's difficult it's surely a different question a difficult question because one of the most sector in crises right now is the travel agents. How easy is it to travel around your country? Nowadays is. . . . . . people like I said before but before this pandemic situation it was very easy to travel around my country actually in Europe because due to thanks to the Europe Union you can travel with your simply country ID in all countries in Europe so you don't need passport to to change country and to travel around travel around and I think it's very important because you can see different cultures and nation without any difficulties, It's important to visit but at the same times may be it's dangerous for negative people that want to make negative things like terrorist for example Which method of travel do you consider safest? Well I would like to say that may be trains are the safest because with the airplane that crash with the boat you can crash. Even with the car you can crush and do different types of mistake so I think trains are the is the most safest method of travel yeah I would like to say trains Has travel become safer in recent years? Yeah I think with development of technology every travel method is becoming safer because of the latest technology you can verify and check difference things in real time and so pilots and pilots can have more facility to do it
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IELTS essay What magazines are popular now?

Essay
  American English
27 paragraphs
1088 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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