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what life in the city like

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Life in a city is a really busy life. People who live in big cities life is different from the people who live in the countryside. Early in the morning hundreds of the people rush out of their home in the manner ants do when their nest is broken. Soon the street is full of traffic. As you can see, the city is a place with advantages and disadvantages. About the advantage, there are a lot of jobs, entertainment, modern universities, hospitals, . . etc. Besides advantage, there is some disadvantage. First, the city has suffered from health problems, diseases related to poor air quality, and sources of polluted water. Second, prices and costs of living are expensive in big cities. Third, the environment in the city is rife with social evils. To recap, the city is a place always busy, but it's worth making discover, experience life. And have more opportunities.
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jobs, entertainment, modern universities, hospitals
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IELTS essay what life in the city like

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
152 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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