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a book that you love to read

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"If we know a hundred year is finite, why do not we live deeply. . . ? " “If we know a hundred year is finite” is a delicate and profound book about stories from the authors’ experiences relating to many aspects of life including family, career, love, etc. It is especially written for the authors’ beloved children who are about to enter adulthood. Therefore, in my opinion, this book is the most suitable for high school students preparing to attend university. The book helps me understand that life is short, we must be positive and take each step slowly so that we can enjoy every second of life and let it imprint on our soul those experiences which have passed. It also helps me find a moment of peace in this hectic world and orient the path for my future. I would definitely give this book five out of five stars because of its beautiful meanings and heartfelt sharings. If I have chances, I will always recommend it to people around me.
"
If we know a hundred year is finite, why do not we
live
deeply
.
.
.
?
"


“If we know a hundred year is finite” is a delicate and profound book

about stories from the authors’ experiences relating to
many
aspects of

life including family, career,
love
, etc. It is
especially
written for the

authors’ beloved children who are about to enter adulthood.
Therefore
,

in my opinion, this book is the most suitable for high school students

preparing to attend university.

The book
helps
me understand that life is short, we
must
be
positive
and

take each step
slowly
so
that we can enjoy every second of life and
let
it

imprint on our soul those experiences which have passed. It
also
helps


me find a moment of peace in this hectic world and orient the path for

my future.

I would definitely give this book five out of five stars
because
of its

beautiful
meanings and heartfelt
sharings
. If I have chances, I will always

recommend it to
people
around me.
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IELTS essay a book that you love to read

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
173 words
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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