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what kind of friend is better -one who is very similar to you or one who is very different? which kind of friend do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation. v.2

what kind of friend is better -one who is very similar to you or one who is very different? which kind of friend do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation. v. 2
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and encourage their employees through cash or title awards, such as Mr or Mrs Clean.

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hand, cleaning and keeping your location, tidy, is a waste of time according to a few
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people
. According to them, these are mundane activities which eat away time from
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other
essential work. There are few
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organisations
which encourage their employees to focus on the
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important
professional task and not to spend much time on cleaning activities.

Finally
, in my opinion, cleanliness around us is
equally
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important
like our personal hygiene. While everything is in place and clean, it
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helps
us to be more productive.
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, having your meeting sheets
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and stationers at your arm's distance
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avoid panic
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to be more efficient.
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is an
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important
etiquette which
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helps
us to benefit in multiple ways.
Hence
, everyone should practice this at a personal and professional environment
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IELTS essay what kind of friend is better -one who is very similar to you or one who is very different? which kind of friend do you prefer and why? Include details and examples in your explanation. v. 2

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
280 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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