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What is your typical weekday like?

What is your typical weekday like? g8nrl

Well, on a typical weekday, I get up early in the morning, take a shower and eat my breakfast. After that, I start read books and prepare for my classes in the afternoon. My classes end around 5. 45. I eat my dinner at around 7: 30 pm, watch the news and surf the internet. I spend time with my family till 11: 30 and then prepare to go to bed. I usually sleep at around 12: 30 and always listen to white noise music before I sleep. If I have an exam or deadline, I will study till late night.

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get
 up early in the morning, take a shower and eat my breakfast. After that, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 read books and prepare for my classes in the afternoon. My classes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 around 5. 45. I eat my dinner at around 7: 30 pm, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 the news and surf the internet. I spend time with my family till 11: 30 and then prepare to go to bed. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
usually
 sleep at around 12: 30 and always listen to white noise music This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I sleep. If I have an exam or deadline, I will study till late night. 

IELTS essay What is your typical weekday like?

Essay

American English

1 paragraphs

101 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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