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to gain experience and to cooperate with people who have extensive

to gain experience and to cooperate with people who have extensive GWppQ
First, to gain experience and to cooperate with people who have extensive experience in the field, as well as improving my knowledge about professional dealing. comprehensive understanding of my major. Second, learning and gathering information about the field of work and market requirements. Not only to move from being a student to someone who understands and practices the requirements of work but also to help understand the fundamentals the importance of business ethics and how good professional ethics and gaining a better understanding of their future job prospects and capabilities. Learning through application is the most important way to progress and succeed To enable to apply what i learned as a student to real-world.
First
, to gain experience and to cooperate with
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people
who have extensive experience in the field,
as well
as improving my knowledge about professional dealing.
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comprehensive
understanding of my major. Second, learning and gathering information about the field of work and market requirements. Not
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only
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
from being a student to someone who understands and practices the requirements of work
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but
also
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
understand the fundamentals the importance of business ethics and how
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
professional ethics and gaining a better understanding of their future job prospects and capabilities.

Learning through application is the most
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important
way to progress and succeed

To enable to apply what
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i
learned as a student to real-world.
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IELTS essay to gain experience and to cooperate with people who have extensive

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
114 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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