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What is your opinion about the advantages of smoking cigarettes?

What is your opinion about the advantages of smoking cigarettes? 0AER3
Nowadays, we are facing dozens of propaganda against smoking cigarettes. Most of us know the disadvantages of cigarettes for our health. However, I believe that as everything has plus, cigarettes have their bright side. Firstly, smoking cigarette helps you when you have sharp pain. Especially it fixes the toothache in a stick. It is not a secret for anybody that our teeth are our one of the most sensitive organs and there is no enough ways of treating them. However, smoke can be helpful for a short time to reach your doctor. Secondly, nothing can replace the impact of cigarette to eliminate the anger. Lots of articles prove that we prefer cigarettes when we are angry. There is an academic reason why. The nicotin inside a stick laps your brain, which chills you out. Instead there are some medicals which works the same way. Third cause that I believe cigarette helps is to balance our weight. Because smoking does not let you get hunger soon. Additionally, cigarettes can make superb tasty combinations with some drinks such as coffee. To sum up, I understand how much smoking is dangerous for our health in the long future, however I see the benefits of them for short term.
Nowadays, we are facing dozens of propaganda against
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cigarettes
. Most of us know the disadvantages of
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cigarettes
for our health.
However
, I believe that as everything has plus,
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cigarettes
have their bright side.

Firstly
,
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smoking
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cigarette
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helps
you when you have sharp pain.
Especially
it
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fixes
the toothache in a stick. It is not a secret for anybody that our teeth are our one of the most sensitive organs and there is no
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enough
ways of treating them.
However
, smoke can be helpful for a short time to reach your doctor.

Secondly
, nothing can replace the impact of
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cigarette
to eliminate the anger. Lots of articles prove that we prefer
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cigarettes
when we are angry. There is an academic reason why. The
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nicotin
inside a stick laps your brain, which chills you out.
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Instead
there are
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medicals which works the same way.

Third cause that I believe
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cigarette
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helps
is to balance our weight.
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Because
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does not
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let
you
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get
hunger
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soon
.
Additionally
,
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cigarettes
can
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make
superb tasty combinations with
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some
drinks such as coffee.

To sum up, I understand how much
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smoking
is
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dangerous
for our health in the long future,
however
I
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see
the benefits of them for short term.
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IELTS essay What is your opinion about the advantages of smoking cigarettes?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
205 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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