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what is your opinion about animals. if we just preserve some of them, is that good?

what is your opinion about animals. if we just preserve some of them, is that good? dpxV6
First of all, I think all animals are neccesary in our lives and non of them has less profit in human lives. Although most of animals do not required, It can effects in nature of world very much. Some animals or insects are the food of other animals and we have a chain of foods which is related to other animals life. A mouse is snak's food and snak is leopard's food. Snail is wall's food and wall is other animal food. This wildlife is not just depend on foods, but although it can influence on other plants and even in human life. in conclusion, Each part of this world is depend on many other parts of this nature and there is nothing useless or non profitable for us.
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and non of them has less profit in human
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. Although most of
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animals
do not required, It can
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in nature of world
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much.

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animals
or insects are the
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food
of
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animals and
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foods
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to
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other
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animals
life. A mouse is
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snak
's
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food
and
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snak
is leopard's
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food
. Snail is wall's
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food
and wall is
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other
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animal
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food
. This wildlife is not
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depend on
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foods
,
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although it can influence on
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other
plants and even in human life.

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in
conclusion, Each part of this world is
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depend
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other
parts of this nature and there is nothing useless or
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non profitable
for us.
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IELTS essay what is your opinion about animals. if we just preserve some of them, is that good?

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
129 words
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