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An American film actor once said , "some people think individuals and countries should pay more attention to the future than to the present give your own experience and examples do you agree or disagree

An American film actor once said, "some people think individuals and countries should pay more attention to the future than to the present give your own experience and examples 6KMNx
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IELTS essay An American film actor once said, "some people think individuals and countries should pay more attention to the future than to the present give your own experience and examples

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
280 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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