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What are advantages of supermarkets over open-air markets

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Nowadays over the manufacture, it is common to sell products, food in the street instead of creating own market. For the majority of people, it surfaces beneficial side. In my opinion, it is more convenient, can easily attract customers, cheaper than the market. Firstly know our personality I can say we always try to make our lives easier. The open-air markets it good options as it you meet every street find what you want to buy. To reinforce it I can say it also manages time. You don't waste your to moving one market to another Furthermore, by selling in open-air markets the sailors can easily attract customers. They placed uniquely to provide scrupulous for their products. they take fresh fruit, vegetables, and groceries. Admittedly no one can't be marginalized as a result they bought it. Due to this reason, their business enhance and get more customers In addition in the street markets the products cheaper than in a special supermarket. The thing I like most is you can bargain with the shop assistant and buy-in cheaper price. In conclusion, the open-air markets have their privilege. I mean they look tasty or delicious to attract a customer on contrary it's saved our time. We can buy it at a cheaper price. -

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 attract customers, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlow-costreasonablelow-pricedcompetitiveeconomical
cheaper
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 manages time. You don't waste your to moving one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
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Furthermore
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 attract customers. They placed uniquely
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 in the street markets the products You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlow-costreasonablelow-pricedcompetitiveeconomical
cheaper
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buy
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cheaper
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In conclusion
, the open-air markets have their privilege. I mean they look tasty or delicious to attract a customer on contrary it's saved our time. We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
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cheaper
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