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What is your name and what is your surname

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My name is Antoni Gonsalles sbss hsjshsgsbs hsjjejsgsjse gajskegs s jaks rnsjjdmensmmshsd hsjskendr jakslsjdjd dhske dhske jahee jsheje hs s sh s ehs e hsjsve shjebe ehje eyeje e hend shsje e dhjd e dhsne svhd e shsne dhsn dudje evdje e dhne rdirueueke e ehrjrbege e dhene rbdje r rbdje r r trrjrnrjrur r djen r rhekkrbr rNowadays, some say that humankind should get used to live with the climate changing warmer over time rather than trying to solve it. I am personally disagree with this opinion. I will discuss some disagree sides of this topic. I begin with discussing disagree of this essay. Firstly many governments should limited the toxic gases because toxic gases to bring global warming. Secondly, I think China, United States America, United Kingdom and other countries emit toxic gases into the air. So a lot of countries need to organize a Green month. Many people to walk by foot and drive bicycle in this month After, emit the less toxic gases into the air. Nowadays, many countries trying to prevent to global warming. On the other hand, as a result of global warming, large glaciers can melt. If the big glaciers melt, the whole earth will be flooded. Secondly, if we do not fight global warming, various skin diseases will result. In conclusion, many people prefer fight to global warming because every people do not live global warming. Nowadays, many countries are looking for different solutions for global warming but global warming cannot be limited.
My name is Antoni
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Gonsalles
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with the climate changing warmer over time
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disagree sides of this topic.
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governments
should
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toxic
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gases
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China, United States America, United Kingdom and other
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countries
emit
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gases
into the air.
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a lot of
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countries
need to organize a Green month.
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to walk by foot and drive bicycle in this month After, emit the less
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gases
into the air. Nowadays,
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trying to
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global
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, large glaciers can melt. If the
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glaciers melt, the whole earth will
be flooded
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Secondly
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, various skin diseases will result.
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solutions for
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IELTS essay What is your name and what is your surname

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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